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Submissions / Re: [PC] Deltarune - "Your Power" by Yug Guy
« on: Today at 12:14:04 AM »
wow this is such a difficult song how did you manage to arrange it
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Submission Archive / Re: [NES] California Games - "Menu" by ShyYoshiGuy
« on: Today at 12:06:52 AM »
Pretty great sheet, nice little tune.
Accepted.
Accepted.
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Submissions / Re: [Wii] Metroid Prime 3: Corruption - "Theme of Rundas" by Maelstrom
« on: August 10, 2020, 04:02:06 PM »I did a lot of simplifications+additions to chords to make this work on piano.
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Submissions / Re: [SWITCH] Fire Emblem: Three Houses - "Guardian of Starlight" by Maelstrom
« on: August 10, 2020, 04:00:45 PM »The first half of the song was normalized to make the notation cleaner.
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Submission Archive / Re: [SWITCH] Paper Mario: The Origami King - "Musée Champignon" by Rubikium
« on: August 10, 2020, 03:18:18 PM »
I got you. Also added a .musx.
accepted
accepted
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Projects / Re: Static's Replacements
« on: August 09, 2020, 03:14:09 PM »
battle to the death is approved
For main theme, this is what I meant:
For main theme, this is what I meant:
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Submissions / Re: [PS1] Xenogears - "The One Who is Torn Apart" by Libera
« on: August 09, 2020, 03:11:02 PM »
man, i need to finish xenogears
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Projects / Re: Zeila's Replacements
« on: August 09, 2020, 03:08:56 PM »
sounds fine.
I'll accept it
I'll accept it
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Projects / Re: Static's Replacements
« on: August 08, 2020, 11:23:13 PM »
Resetti
Accepted
Battle to the Death
-Can any effort be made to line up the cresc. and forte in m42-43?
-This one is up to you, but maybe break the beams over rests and the sets of 3 8ths? I'd personally recommend it.
Notes seem really great. Something feels off about m25 but all the notes seem to be correct. \
Main Theme of FFV
I hear 3rds in the first beat in the LH, no different from m2. Same for m3]
I can hear a 2nd constant note making disonnaces in the LH. This is hard to explain, but for m1-5 I hear that extra note as a G above the chord. For m6, an A. This gets really important in m8, however, because that note is now an A and that forms a nice dim chord on beat 3 that is completely lost otherwise. What do you think about adding this in in some way? That harmony is present throughout the first page. It stays in a 6th above the root until m13, where it returns to the 5th for 3 measures, before going back to the 6th in m16, which is the reason there's a difference in the bassline between m15 and 116.
-I know its because we use ped differently markings, but it's really bothering me that it ends prematurely in m28. Either extend it to the end of the measure or have the next measure's marking appear there.
Aside from that, it's prety great, nice job
for some reason, the chord progressions here remind me of fire emblem 4 and i can't tell why.
Accepted
Battle to the Death
-Can any effort be made to line up the cresc. and forte in m42-43?
-This one is up to you, but maybe break the beams over rests and the sets of 3 8ths? I'd personally recommend it.
Notes seem really great. Something feels off about m25 but all the notes seem to be correct. \
Main Theme of FFV
I hear 3rds in the first beat in the LH, no different from m2. Same for m3]
I can hear a 2nd constant note making disonnaces in the LH. This is hard to explain, but for m1-5 I hear that extra note as a G above the chord. For m6, an A. This gets really important in m8, however, because that note is now an A and that forms a nice dim chord on beat 3 that is completely lost otherwise. What do you think about adding this in in some way? That harmony is present throughout the first page. It stays in a 6th above the root until m13, where it returns to the 5th for 3 measures, before going back to the 6th in m16, which is the reason there's a difference in the bassline between m15 and 116.
-I know its because we use ped differently markings, but it's really bothering me that it ends prematurely in m28. Either extend it to the end of the measure or have the next measure's marking appear there.
Aside from that, it's prety great, nice job
for some reason, the chord progressions here remind me of fire emblem 4 and i can't tell why.
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Projects / Re: Latios212's Replacements
« on: August 08, 2020, 10:02:07 PM »
Overture
2 things. First, the last measure has a 3rd harmony for all of the final measure.
The second is the powerful chords in m7 and m11. They didn't sit well with me tonally at all. I couldn't hear the 5th, but just the octave wasn't enough. After fiddling, I reached this conclusion:
Or, what it would look like in the final sheet:
It's certainly not the simplest way to do it, but it's easy enough to play and sounds fantastic on a piano. I highly recommend changing it.
File Select
Unfortunately, that's not a pure repeat. 2nd time through, unadjusted, it looks like this:
Maybe include ped for the final measure? It'd be hard to replicate the echo heard in the original without it.
2 things. First, the last measure has a 3rd harmony for all of the final measure.
The second is the powerful chords in m7 and m11. They didn't sit well with me tonally at all. I couldn't hear the 5th, but just the octave wasn't enough. After fiddling, I reached this conclusion:
Or, what it would look like in the final sheet:
It's certainly not the simplest way to do it, but it's easy enough to play and sounds fantastic on a piano. I highly recommend changing it.
File Select
Unfortunately, that's not a pure repeat. 2nd time through, unadjusted, it looks like this:
Maybe include ped for the final measure? It'd be hard to replicate the echo heard in the original without it.
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Projects / Re: Zeila's Replacements
« on: August 08, 2020, 09:37:31 PM »
Icicle Mountain
m,27 RH - pretty sure both of these chords have grace notes leading up to them. Also in m33. For m27, I can see no reason not to add them, as it doesn't make it significantly difficult to play, unlike some other places where you left it out.
Big fan of what you did with this, nice work.
m,27 RH - pretty sure both of these chords have grace notes leading up to them. Also in m33. For m27, I can see no reason not to add them, as it doesn't make it significantly difficult to play, unlike some other places where you left it out.
Big fan of what you did with this, nice work.
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Submission Archive / Re: [SWITCH] Paper Mario: The Origami King - "Musée Champignon" by Rubikium
« on: August 08, 2020, 09:16:05 PM »
The opening tempo seems rather .... large. I can fix that at a later point though.
The "composed by" is large and unwieldy but idk how to fix it.
I hear an A# on beat 1 of m14 RH instead of the rest. It's faint, but very much there. Also, the courtesy accidental there should have parentheses around it because it's a courtesy accidental, not one outside the key signature.
That's all I've got. Comment on these and I can make any changes you can't and accept it.
The "composed by" is large and unwieldy but idk how to fix it.
I hear an A# on beat 1 of m14 RH instead of the rest. It's faint, but very much there. Also, the courtesy accidental there should have parentheses around it because it's a courtesy accidental, not one outside the key signature.
That's all I've got. Comment on these and I can make any changes you can't and accept it.
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