I just listened to some of your drafts. Although I did not make it through all of them, I will tell you my thoughts until now:
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Good job.
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Show posts MenuQuote from: Bespinben on April 01, 2015, 09:53:49 PMSpoiler
Even a barebones one-line song like this deserves a fair treatment, complete with pencils, fist slams, and fingering a la Schroeder! Please enjoy my newest Pokémon Mystery Dungeon arrangement on this fine day of April 1st.
[3DS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Gates to Infinity:
"Pokémon Paradise 1":
[MUS] [MIDI] [PDF] [MP3]
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8eMws_1xZ6o[close]
Quote from: Bespinben on March 29, 2015, 10:06:05 PM(Anyone that's played a Urtext edition of Moonlight Sonata should know the meaning though... ^^)
Quote from: Raymondbl on March 19, 2015, 06:12:19 PMInteresting. Which language(s) do you feel have the most potential for the future? I'm sort of bummed out that I chose to invest in my first programming language (Java), and am looking to specialize in another language more useful for heavy desktop applications or client-side web applications.
Quote from: mariolegofan on March 23, 2015, 08:46:27 PMYeah, I was reading about crucifixion and it often times took days for people to die! Oddly though, Jesus was on the cross for only 6 hours before he died (if you believe the Bible that is).
Quote from: ZeldaFan on March 23, 2015, 09:59:47 AM#30 - Mar 23, 2015
What stresses you out?
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on March 23, 2015, 12:48:09 PMfixed and uploaded, although the ties were grudgingly added
Quote from: Bloop on March 23, 2015, 11:44:16 AMSpoiler
I'll just put my criticism list in here and be as clear as possible. Note that I didn't read anything in this thread so ehm
let's get this started
-The title and composer text boxes have to be bold. This should be doable, it's probably the same way as italic text. But then with bold. I'm not sure if keyboard shortcuts are the same in Notepad, but this could be done with Ctrl + Shift + B.
Move the song and game title up a bit, as it's getting a bit cramped with the arranger and composer names.
Also, make sure the quotation marks in the title are also in the smaller titles on the 2nd and 3rd page.
-Make sure the rhythm notations in the left hand in m. 13 (and similar) are the same as in m. 1 (and similar). This is to make clear to the reader where the beats are in the measure. So instead of [8th - 8th - 8th - half (tie) 8th], make it [8th - 8th - 8th - 8th (tie) half].
Because of this same reason, the second quarter note in m. 9 (and similar) has to be two tied eighths.
Notate m. 11 like this:
[16th - 16th - staccato 8th - 8th rest - 8th (tie) half]
And measures like m. 14 like this:
[8th - 8th - 8th - 8th (tie) quarter - quarter]
-Instead of the pedal markings in the first few measures, add a "ped ad lib" marking at the beginning of the score, under the left hand. This means the player can use the pedal as he wants; Don't try to get the playback as best as you can, it's just a simple reference.[close]
Quote from: Bespinben on March 19, 2015, 08:50:08 PMSince this is my first time correcting an arrangement of yours, I went ahead I did this one for you, so that way for future arrangements (like "Song of Awakening + Ending") you have an idea of what I expect of sheets:
Quote from: Raymondbl on March 19, 2015, 05:20:19 PMWhat is your job/What kind of projects do you work on?
Quote from: Raymondbl on March 19, 2015, 05:20:19 PMWhat programming languages do you know?
Quote from: Bespinben on March 18, 2015, 08:21:39 PM15 bucks a day for sitting around doing nothing? I'll take it!
Quote from: thisgood on March 19, 2015, 03:34:21 AMum???
Quote from: Wolf on March 17, 2015, 02:03:01 AMAgreed. So we can tell between noobs and skilled players by checking the trinket. If they bought the upgraded version, then their pro
Quote from: braixen1264 on March 16, 2015, 07:46:42 AMand yeah for the record korean kids do know basic english.
also i found the upgraded yellow trinket to be really helpful. why doesnt anyone else do it? its only 250 gold.
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