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#5161
The LH of the first page looks really odd and I had to listen to the original to really tell what was going on here; might I suggest separating it into layers?
#5162
- The first chord in 14 sounds like it's an E on the bottom instead of a D. Same when that chord appears later, and also in m. 24.
- It sounds like there should be one last 16th note in the LH in the last measure, all the way at the end. I say it's a G, Maelstrom says it's a Bn. What say you?
#5163
I guess not, haha. There we go
#5164
There are also some slightly misaligned notes in places where there used to be overlap. I can get this for you if you want later.

But nice job.
#5165
I got rid of the tied D in the last measure and added an indication to make it clearer that the RH is to play the rolled chord on the bottom staff. Better?
#5166
Quote from: Latios212 on February 17, 2017, 03:29:45 PMEarthBound reference? :P
Fix the m. 2 rhythms. You know what to do.
#5167
#5168
Off-Topic / Re: Religion
February 19, 2017, 12:45:55 PM
Why not both?
#5169
New replacement for today. A bit simplistic, but the other layers are really unsuited for piano in a lot of places. I think it sounds alright, though. If nothing else it's easier to play.

Mario Kart: Super Circuit
NEW!   Sky Garden[MUS][Original] 

#5171
Thanks for checking my sheet! Everything has been resolved.
#5172
If you're going to write it like that (which is fine btw, the performer will probably take some of those notes with the LH anyway) you may as well combine m. 41 similarly. (I experimented with cross-staff but it seems a bit imposing and unnecessary.)
#5173
- m. 40 - perhaps put the G in the RH? For the continuity of voices.
- Maybe move the last C in m. 41 a bit to the right; right now it's almost directly under the Eb.
- There's another tempo fluctuation around m. 48 you could notate.

Very nice sheet you have here. However there are a bunch of notes I don't hear in the original.

- m. 50: I don't hear the D being re-struck on beat 3. More like held over.
- m. 52: The G on beat 2.
- m. 60: The C on beat 3.
- m. 66: The last D.

And the last measure should be 15ma, not 8va.

The original track is very nice, and your sheet is as well.
#5174
Thanks for making it more playable. Much better.

Some minor mistakes:
- End of m. 12 and similar: Bb-->A#
- That E in the last measure on beat 3.5 is an octave higher.
- There shouldn't be a hook at the end of the second ending line in m. 11.
- A suggestion, but it might be better to distribute a bit more space to the first system instead of the last.

Very good transcription. The above changes are in a file here: https://www.dropbox.com/s/ydr3975l8ieo8vj/Whispy%20Woods%20Land.musx?dl=1

Other than that, I might suggest staccatos in the RH at the beginning, but it's probably hard to make it noticeable while playing so it's no big deal.

Good sheet.
#5175
Ah yes, the separation of voices is much better now. About the weird intervals at the end, might I suggest keeping the top layer in its original octave throughout instead of lowering every other measure? This would be at the expense of some of the beat 3-3.5 notes in the other layer at times but since it's a repeating figure I think that's alright. Up to you though, see if you like that.

Also the LH of 18 and 22 look a bit... funny. I guess 18 is alright but for 20 perhaps it would be better to put the D under the 8va as well.