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the only character I really have a problem with is Braixen. Not only does its design annoy me, its playstyle is so laaaame.

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Hello, I'm new here (I guess?)! I've arranged a couple of sheets from those Pokémon games and have a few more in the works ^^

Oh dear. It's been too long since I've done anything. How about this?

Xenoblade Chronicles—Main Theme
MIDI   PDF   MUS   MUSX

Aaugh I completely forgot to check this out! This is a really fantastic sheet, you done it again!

nice job latios!

Oo. Yeah I'm not sure about the copyright date then, I saw you had the original AA listed, and that came out in 2001. If this is for a different game, perhaps it should be listed as such. Let's have someone more well versed than me in AA to weigh in on this.

Welcome to NSM! You can edit the files through the NSM Panel where you first submitted this sheet!

Be sure to read [the formatting guidelnes], specifically the parts on what size and style fonts to use; it has a list of what size and style to make each text box so you can avoid shifting the text too far to the right as you have now. You can move the music and the composer/arranger text down a bit; you have lots of space at the bottom of the page.

The copyright should be at the bottom of the page as follows:
Capcom © 2001
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Ah whoops, I kind of overlooked the LH rhythm here so yeah it'd work better to mirror that.

Anyway, I'll make the changes within a couple days, hopefully.

I'M NOT THE ONE WHO MOVED LOL

Still in New York.

Whee more B/W~

I've never been a fan of putting two of the same note in different layers adjacent to each other, especially when the measures are a little squished. Try something like this out maybe for measure 17? (Also, beat 4 is misaligned.)

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And perhaps you could put the bass in half notes instead of whole notes for the second half of the song to better emulate the low drum beats?

Wow, this sheet looks and sounds great! Though, I'm not sure how much I like the RH marking overlapping the staff in measure 21.

Quick visual things:
- Arranger isn't right aligned.
- I'd flip m.2 beat 3 RH.
- Move the rests back onto the staff in m.3, LH.
- The dynamic is touching the note in m.4. You could also try moving the staccato above the note.
- You've got an extra natural in m.23.

You also might want to consider using 8vb in m.19.

Besides that, everything seems to be pretty in order, nice job!

Sounds great! However, there's a bunch of visual clutter to clean up.

- You can condense quarter rest + eighth rest into a dotted quarter rest in places like measure 2 since we're in 6/8.
- The top staff's too close to the top of the page on page 2 (and 3).
- Most importantly, I think the overlapping layers in RH look quite messy in places. Might I suggest an approach of this sort?

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I know you have Notepad so you can't do all of these yourself; I'd make the changes myself but I'm kind of busy right now so I'll leave it for someone else to do if they have time~

These look like some really small edits. I'll go ahead and update your sheet now; you go submit something else! (It's perfectly fine to have small changes like this made via the site errors topic.)

edit: done!