4-voice fugue in the second part of this one.
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Show posts MenuQuote from: Static on October 26, 2019, 02:38:06 PMTrasdegi - Zero Escape: Virtue's Last Reward - Portentousness
Before Latios takes a look at those accidentals, I have a couple things:
- m5: The last note in the sextuplet should be E natural like in m1.
- The accidentals in the 2nd half look good to me generally speaking - the intervals are all consistent. I think the Bbs and Abs in the 2nd layer should be A#s and G#s though, since they fit in the chords better.
Quote from: Latios212 on October 21, 2019, 04:13:50 PMTrasdegi - PortentousnessNo prob. Couple more things before the nitty-gritty of note checking:
- Distribution makes the first system extremely squished. I know you're limited with Notepad, but if I help format this for you I would highly recommend using a repeat around the first four bars (if applicable) or using 2 pages otherwise.
- Might want to have another look at the accidentals in the second half. Can definitely try to assist when checking but it looks like some parts could be written a little better.
Quote from: Latios212 on October 19, 2019, 02:41:44 PMTrasdegi - Portentousness
- I don't think rolled chords are the best way to write the first half. Besides not meshing with the other layer well, it leaves the execution unclear as the chord is far too big for the right hand to roll naturally. Each of the ascending notes is distinctly marked so this would be better written as an ascending run of distinct notes.
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