Ah, nice and simple: always good for me!
-In the last bar the F# sounds like an Fn to me and the last note sounds like a Cn rather than a Dn.
-http should be changed to https in the url.
-The game name could come a bit closer to the title and the 'Composition by' could come a little further down I think.
-Instead of a double dotted rest in bar 4 I'd use a minim rest followed by a crotchet rest followed by a quaver. Like this:
-If you're into courtesy accidentals the first note in the final bar might be a nice place for one.
I took the liberty of updating the files for you with the above changes (including the courtesy accidental) but if you have any problems with that do let me know.
Approved.
-In the last bar the F# sounds like an Fn to me and the last note sounds like a Cn rather than a Dn.
-http should be changed to https in the url.
-The game name could come a bit closer to the title and the 'Composition by' could come a little further down I think.
-Instead of a double dotted rest in bar 4 I'd use a minim rest followed by a crotchet rest followed by a quaver. Like this:
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I took the liberty of updating the files for you with the above changes (including the courtesy accidental) but if you have any problems with that do let me know.
Approved.