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I added the E, but I don't think there's an A. I think it's a holdover from a previous A that moves to a G# (perhaps slightly delayed).
I think you meant bar 19, but yeah you're right; I was just imagining it I think.
I agree, and it already was? Maybe you meant something else though.
I had another listen and it's root position as far as I can tell.
Fixed.
I think so, and I added another one at bar 28 as well.
Whoopsie.
Hopefully that looks better now!
Unrelated to the above, I also went through and rewrote some of the left hand to make it more clear how to pedal the piece. This required some interesting stuff in bar 29, but I think that's as good as it can get really.
Thanks for checking!
Quote from: Latios212 on June 08, 2019, 10:04:39 AM- The first chord in m. 18 is rooted on an E at the bottom. I think the LH should be E-A
I added the E, but I don't think there's an A. I think it's a holdover from a previous A that moves to a G# (perhaps slightly delayed).
Quote from: Latios212 on June 08, 2019, 10:04:39 AM- I'm not really hearing the LH D on beat 2 of m. 18 although it makes sense where it is
I think you meant bar 19, but yeah you're right; I was just imagining it I think.
Quote from: Latios212 on June 08, 2019, 10:04:39 AM- m. 24 first chord sound like G# on bottom
I agree, and it already was? Maybe you meant something else though.
Quote from: Latios212 on June 08, 2019, 10:04:39 AM- Chord in m. 28 sounds like the wrong inversion, like it should have the B on bottom
I had another listen and it's root position as far as I can tell.
Quote from: Latios212 on June 08, 2019, 10:04:39 AM- You could combine 8vas in m. 28-29
- Cross staff line between 29-30 like 25-26?
Fixed.
Quote from: Latios212 on June 08, 2019, 10:04:39 AM- m. 32 chord also sounds like it has an E on top
I think so, and I added another one at bar 28 as well.
Quote from: Latios212 on June 08, 2019, 10:04:39 AM- Tied octave in m. 36 is at the wrong octave
Whoopsie.
Quote from: Latios212 on June 08, 2019, 10:04:39 AM- The downward rolled chord arrows could be adjusted a bit so that the vertical line of the arrow doesn't stick out from the wavy part at the bottom
Hopefully that looks better now!
Unrelated to the above, I also went through and rewrote some of the left hand to make it more clear how to pedal the piece. This required some interesting stuff in bar 29, but I think that's as good as it can get really.
Thanks for checking!