Oof, caught me the day after I put my computer away, so my response isn’t gonna be so quick this time. Probably still within a week though, anyways. Thank you for the feedback, heh. I’m always shocked by how much there could possibly be, but to be fair I’ve just started this.
The main thing I have to say about this sheet is that you're missing a lot of harmonies in the RH. Often, there are multiple voices or chords in the original, whereas you only write one voice into the RH in most places. If you haven't already been using it or a similar too, I recommend using the AudioStretch app for iOS or Android to slow down the audio and listen more carefully to the notes. The full app costs money, but there's a free lite version for iOS.
Bought the full app a while ago, my sheets definitely wouldn’t have been possible without it, heh.
- In m15-29 RH, a lot of the bottom notes are inaccurate. In m16, they should be F and E (thirds) instead of C and C. In m17, it should be D instead of B. In m20-21, they should be D, E, and D (fourths) instead of C, C, and B.
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- The bassline in m23-30 is not the same as m15-22. (Likewise, the bassline in m71-78 is not the same either.)
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- I didn't check every measure on the bassline, so please please please go through the whole bassline again (raising the audio by an octave in a program like AudioStretch or Audacity can help) and carefully check/retranscribe all the notes accordingly.
One of those cases where I think it’s the same, copy/paste it, and not notice the difference in playback. Ok, I’ll check the bassline.
Also, m55-62 should be written as a single four-measure phrase with a repeat sign and a note that says "Repeat 3 times," since all three four-measure phrases are identical.
That’s allowed? Sweet. Is there a way to rig the MIDI up so it knows to read it thrice?
Edit 8/29/2020: No need for a bump, I’ve not forgotten about this. I addressed all the feedback except retranscribing the baseline. I hope to be done by when school starts Tuesday.