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Should the title of this game start with "The"? If so, I'll edit it, you don't need to create a new entryOh shoot, you’re absolutely right. My bad!
OMG THATS BEAUTIFUL! Thank you very much, im not an advanced piano player but ill practice this song a lot until i can play it! Thank You! Im glad i introduced you to this amazing soundtrack!No problem! If you wanted to simplify it a little for yourself, you could play the first note of the 16th note triplets in the right hand as an 8th note instead (and leave out the second two notes). Those are just embellishments so it'll sound good without them too! And you can always add them back in once you're ready for them.
I may have worded that first point a little confusingly, here's what I meant:Ohhh, gotcha. That's fine with me too, fixed!
-Makes sense to me, done
- m8-9: The weird pitch slidy thing plays an E below the A, which I think you could include, perhaps at the expense of the F grace note
- m17: You can hide the half rest in the RH, and perhaps widen the distance between the staves here
-Yeah you're right about that, fixed.
- m8 beat 3.5 LH: I hear an extra D here
- m13 beat 4.5 and all similar occurences: The Bb-C-E chord sounds to me like a Bb-D-E chord
- m29 & 31 beat 4.5 RH: I hear the guitar play C#-E-G here, but no A. Could you incorporate that somehow?
- System spacing: Maybe 4 per page would be better than 5 and 3?
That's all though, nice arrangement!Thank you, and thanks for taking a look! I'm quite happy with the way this one turned out.
• in the RH lower layer, there's a few places like m8 that the new F# accidental is inside the notehead of the E. You could move the # symbol a little to the left like this, applies for m9,10,12,17,18,20 as well (image is fixed m8)Aw shoot, I had noticed those before and meant to fix before submitting but it must have slipped my mind. Should be fixed now.
• I'm a little torn on this, but 25-28 the string part that's the RH lower layer is technically playing A-C-E on each beat to fill out the F that the bass plays. You could have En under the current An as opposed to Fn except for beat 4.5 (the strings lead into next chord, where they play A-D-F technically), but I'll leave it up to you since it is just replacing one octaved note (F) for another (E) between the hands. This feedback has similar recommendation to one I left about middle layers for m29-32, essentiallyI like the E because it matches what's going on in m29-32 with the F#, good idea!
