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Site News / Re: Update, Sunday 27th of February 2022
« on: February 27, 2022, 09:40:54 PM »
i'm reading can this w-

holy shit crypt of the necrodancer

and fe fates and deltarune and mkwii and some much needed replacements but cotd's ost is too underrated

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edit: wgat the frig it duplicated messages h

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fumikado gaming

[Reactivate Majestical Imperial] Moon Child ~ Homunculus Dream: Listen on MuseScore | Original

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yeah i still kinda exist kinda who knows motivation is weird. anyways i redid one of my oldest arrangements because i wasnt satisfied with it tbh.

[Legacy of Lunatic Kingdom] The Sea Where One's Home Planet Reflects: Listen on Musescore | Original

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this is it, ninsheetmusic has peaked. stop trying to achieve higher since this is the best we'll ever see.

also something about "amusement device" is absolutely SENDING me

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Site News / Re: Update, Sunday 30th of January 2022
« on: January 30, 2022, 10:16:53 PM »
there's so much good stuff in this update i cant even pick specifics


well, except for the kirby air ride, of course :yaby:

replacement POGGGGGGGGG

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Forum Games / Re: Whoevers post last wins. New rule.
« on: January 29, 2022, 12:14:51 AM »
i dont have a request

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Notes/accuracy:

-In the pickup, the third and fourth notes should be a C and an A.

-In bars 2-4/6-8 the lower notes on beat 3 and 3.5 sound like they should be C -> D rather than D -> G.

-The bass in bar 9 plays an F that then moves to an F# on beat 4, rather than an Eb that moves to an Fn.

-I don't hear the Bb or the An in any of the chords in bars 11-12.  I'd suggest replacing them with a doubled G and F#, respectively.

-In bar 12 the bass should be an F# on beat 4 rather than an Fn.

-There's a little descending D -> A just at the end of bar 12, leading into the G in bar 13.

-The lower G on beat 1 of bar 14/16 sounds like an An.

-The lower A on beat 4 of bar 17/19 sounds like a Dn.

-I don't hear the piano line resolve in bar 20.

-The ascending string pattern in bar 20 sounds more like this to me:
Spoiler
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Arrangement/playability:
My comments here mainly just concern the left hand in bars 13-20.  There are some accuracy concerns I have here as well but I'm going to leave mentioning them out while we focus on getting the style right.  You can have another look at the notes here though and see if you can spot them yourself, though, of course.

-Bars 13-16: this accompaniment pattern is very hard to play, particularly the jump at the end of bars 14/16.  There are a number of other options you could try out here.  One would be to move the top notes of the off-beat dyads down an octave, another would be to 'massage' the notes a little so that they fit under the hand easier (maybe alternating with the fifth rather than the third).

-Bars-17-20: This left hand is quite awkward to play (and also not very accurate to the original in places).  I think it might be easier to have this section match the left hand of the previous section, without all of these extra sixteenth notes.  Alternatively, maybe you could adjust the final note in each set of three to be up the octave, and that way it would be a lot easier to play and still cover the same rhythm.  Something else to think about, anyway.



I think that's enough for now.  I don't want to make this post too intimidating.  I think what you have is a good start and I hope we can continue to work through it!  Let me know if you need any help with anything, or any clarification on something I said.

alright, fixed all of this

Presentation-wise I think this looks pretty good generally; there's just a few details that I'll comment on (later). 

Something that I should first is that the pickup has been erroneously included in the bar numbering, but I'll be using the current bar numbers when I refer to anything to avoid confusion.  That does need to be fixed though.  To keep this slightly more bite-sized and more approachable, I'm just going to give feedback on the first 19 bars (up to bar 21).

i have no clue how this happened, but then again, the conversion was really janky this time for some reason

-Again in bars 2-4/6-8, I think the dyads on beat 4.5 should be tied over to the next bar rather than coming off immediately.  That sounds to me like what happens in the original.

im hearing some space in between the start of the next measure and the end of the last so i kept it the way it was

-It sounds to me like the second layer in bar 5 should resolve to a Bb in bar 6, rather than a Dn.

relistening and noticing its a chord, Dn+Bb



alright hopefully i did things right h

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Site News / Re: Update, Thursday 30th of December 2021
« on: December 30, 2021, 11:39:07 PM »
>xenoblade x, minecraft, kirby's epic yarn


LET'S FUCKING GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

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damn, what a great coincidence, you completing your 400th sheet not only on my birthday, but also from my favorite game?


just one issue, the LH is really quiet, almost unhearable beginning from m.2/3 all the way to m.32, at least on my end? its strange...

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damn, i was hoping that someone would arrange riki's theme at some point. and it sounds nice. and tomorrow with you aaaaaaa (even tho i already saw this one). god xenoblade 2 has such a gorgeous ost aaaaaaaaaaaaa


anyways uhhhhhhhh

"HEROPON RIIR"




"HEROPON RIIR"

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Piano Arrangements / Re: Arrangement Highlights of 2021
« on: December 26, 2021, 10:15:27 PM »
well h*ck i wasnt able to do the most arranging due to a lotta shit going down for me, so im gonna include fangame arrangements that cant be submitted because i need mental validation from myself.

No. 5

Act the Fool ~ HAHAHA - Len'en 4: Brilliant Pagoda or Haze Castle

there were some parts of this song i couldnt determine, so this is overall one of my weakest arrangements tbh. maybe doesnt help that im not a huge fan of this song in the first place.

this song is number 69 in the official len'en music playlist.
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No. 4

Walking a Road that Ends in Futility - Len'en 3: Reactivate Majestical Imperial

underrated song, nice little relaxing tune. len'en music good. maybe im just biased because rmi is my favorite len'en ost.
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No. 3 (Fangame Arrangement)

The Utopia World is Perfect ~ Utopian Society - Len'en Eiji 2: Glorious Memory Lane

god DAMN does this theme slap. lenk did a fucking fantastic job on this theme holy HELL.

even before i really joined the western len'en fanbase i was still hyped as hell for this game. its STILL in development, but i now am friends with quite a bit of the team, and they're working hard on it.

all and all, despite me arranging this knowing it could never go up on the site, im still proud of it because i captured a lot of the energy and spirit of the original without making it too unplayable.
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No. 2

Dichromatic Lotus Butterfly ~ Ancients - Seihou 1: Shuusou Gyoku

ill admit, it has taken me an EMBARRASSINGLY long time to figure out all the differences between the original DLB and the album version. still, i am in the (probably) majority who likes the album version more than the original. i still think this theme is a bit overlooked when compared to that one, tho, and this one is still fun to listen to, with its constant rushing accompanying arpeggios (which there was no way in HELL i was transcribing). also, seihou is criminally underrated. its a sister series to touhou not developed by ZUN (touhou creator), but friends of his, but the music of the first two was composed by him and there are three touhou characters who make cameos.

oops i nerded out on seihou here
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No. 1

Tendency that Sways Even Anchors ~ Lost Anchorage - Len'en 1: Evanescent Existence

this is one of my favorite len'en songs, yet the one i talk about the most since, unlike the other two, this one is one of the less popular themes. i have my reasons to love this theme so much, and they basically boil down to "i kept getting stuck on this stage", so this song brings me lots of nostalgia. im glad this song is able to translate well onto piano, and i love the swaying feel of the entire song.
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oops all len'en!

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alright, i think i addressed all of this correctly, if im reading it right. i have no clue what happened with the formatting as its usually much better than this but oh well (i should note i use whatever the latest version of musescore 3.5 was because im admittedly too lazy to learn how to not make everything look horrid on my eyes)

also, alongside hiding the rit tempos, the "a tempo" at m.13 should be changed to q=156. id do that myself but i dont recall finale notepad having the ability to do that so oops, sorry.

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slider momence

anyways how could you forget this game exists when it has the factual best kirby song, dededestroyer z?

also glad to see this game's ost getting more love :>

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VIVIT gaming

also hi i have motivation to submit something again.

edit: also i am aware that the rit tempos should be hidden. seems the version of the xml fixer i had didnt work there

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