hydrocity act 1 and xenoblade 2 sheet pog
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Show posts MenuQuote from: Static on May 16, 2021, 05:30:14 PM
- Left side of tempo marking should line up with the left side of the time signature
- Did you intend m4 LH beat 3.5 to be staccato? Sounds the same as all the other measures to me.
- Not sure if I agree on your dynamic choices. There definitely is a crescendo in m8, but m9 sounds more like a fakeout to me, like it goes back to mp. Then the percussion builds slightly in m13-16 to lead into the m17 section, which sounds the loudest/highest-energy of all the sections.
I think you should be able to make all of these adjustments to the current files with NotePad, but I can make them for you if not. I'll wait to hear your input first though.
Quote from: Latios212 on May 02, 2021, 08:34:48 PMNice work, this is pretty solid
First thing, the accompaniment. You have the chords mostly right but the bass notes and voicing are a little off. The left hand of the first few measures should look like this:The next few measures are similar, except the second half of m. 8 (the measure with the crescendo) should use G# and C#. The last eight measures sound like they just repeat the pattern from the first two measures four times.Spoiler
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Lastly, I would suggest using mp and mf as dynamics instead of p and mp since the song doesn't sound that soft to me, but up to you as you know the piece best.
Quote from: Latios212 on May 02, 2021, 08:34:48 PMA few words on articulations:
- I would suggest removing them on the eighth notes in the left hand (also as in the image above). I think that implies too much of a detached feel that the original doesn't have.
- Was it intentional to not put staccatos on the second iteration of the melody (starting in m. 5) because of different instrumentation?
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