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NinSheetMusic / Submission Archive / Re: [3DS] Kirby: Triple Deluxe - "Moonlight Capital" by LeviR.star
on: Today at 07:12:49 AM
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NinSheetMusic / Submission Archive / Re: [3DS] Kirby: Triple Deluxe - "Moonlight Capital" by LeviR.star
on: Today at 07:12:44 AM
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Started by Zeta - Last post by Static | ||
Good catch, but I think that's the added reverb effect, and besides, I'd rather keep it consistent between those measures.makes sense to me I should be in bed |
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NinSheetMusic / Submissions / Re: [Wii] Kirby's Return to Dream Land - "Steel Station" by Kricketune54
on: Today at 06:56:07 AM
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Started by Zeta - Last post by Radiak488417 | ||
Composer breakdown for RTDL is here. A few of the songs are technically unconfirmed but are very educated guesses based on the internal formatting of the sound files and the composers' styles.
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NinSheetMusic / Submission Archive / Re: [3DS] Kirby: Triple Deluxe - "Moonlight Capital" by LeviR.star
on: Today at 06:16:10 AM
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Started by Zeta - Last post by LeviR.star | ||
Just one thing from me: beat 1 of m49 sounds like it should be a quarter note. It's a bit longer than the one in m25. Good catch, but I think that's the added reverb effect, and besides, I'd rather keep it consistent between those measures. |
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NinSheetMusic / Submissions / Re: [Wii] Kirby's Return to Dream Land - "Steel Station" by Kricketune54
on: Today at 05:20:04 AM
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Started by Zeta - Last post by Kricketune54 | ||
Hello it's me with the obligatory composer credit: this one is by Hirokazu Ando, as confirmed through the Triple Deluxe sound test. Oooo good snipe, I had not thought to look there and I don't own a copy of the game. Did you manually look in the Triple Deluxe sound test or do you have a link for composer credits? MSF I can't seem to change the composer text that you used could you dropbox a new .mus and pdf? |
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NinSheetMusic / Submissions / Re: [Wii] Kirby's Return to Dream Land - "Steel Station" by Kricketune54
on: Today at 05:03:46 AM
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Started by Zeta - Last post by Radiak488417 | ||
Hello it's me with the obligatory composer credit: this one is by Hirokazu Ando, as confirmed through the Triple Deluxe sound test.
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NinSheetMusic / Submissions / Re: [3DS] The Legend of Zelda: Tri Force Heroes - "Title Theme" by Cashwarrior1
on: Today at 04:29:19 AM
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Started by Zeta - Last post by mastersuperfan | ||
Looks fantastic, a few final things:
- The crescendo in m18 could be moved up a bit so it's not so close to the staccato. - The second grace note in m26 should be An, not Ab. - Courtesy Bn in m33 LH? - m38 LH beat 1.75 clashes with beat 2. You can use the Note Position tool to cluster the 16th notes on beat 1 a bit closer together to the left. - Your headers, page numbers, and copyright exceed the page margins. Click on it > Text > Alignment > Top/Bottom. - Subtitle should say THE Legend of Zelda. Also, I know I said to move them up, but TBH it's probably also okay to rests in m55-56 back in their default position since pretty much all the other rests in the RH are in their default position. That's all I've got, so I'll approve this now (pending the above fixes) so that someone else can take a look at it. |
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NinSheetMusic / Submissions / Re: [Wii] Kirby's Return to Dream Land - "Steel Station" by Kricketune54
on: Today at 04:15:40 AM
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Started by Zeta - Last post by mastersuperfan | ||
Looks good to me! Since this went through a lot of changes since Mael looked at it, I'm going to ask another updater to take a quick look before accepting.
One thing (not sure if this is on your end too or just mine): the PDF looks fine, but when I open the MUS, there's a redundant E natural on m27 RH beat 2 that gets in the way of the rolled chord marking. Did you edit the MUS file? If so, Notepad might've screwed it up... or it might just be an import issue on my end. |
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NinSheetMusic / Submissions / Re: [3DS] Fire Emblem Echoes: Shadows of Valentia - "The Heritors of Arcadia" by Libera
on: Today at 03:54:09 AM
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Started by Zeta - Last post by Static | ||
One last thing I forgot to mention earlier...
Since that video you linked says English version, I figured there was a Japanese version and it is indeed on the OST. Since you don't have lyrics, it might be a good idea to include the extra melody notes (or mark the missing notes) that are in the other version(s) cuz sometimes the syllables are different. From the listing on VGMdB, it looks like there's an instrumental version too. Up to you I guess, idk how much that would overcomplicate your sheet, but it's something to think about. |
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NinSheetMusic / Submissions / Re: [3DS] Fire Emblem Echoes: Shadows of Valentia - "The Heritors of Arcadia" by Libera
on: Today at 03:45:23 AM
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Started by Zeta - Last post by mastersuperfan | ||
This one I'm pretty sure of - don't really hear the figure jump up and play D-E-D there.Yeah, I hear this one as an A too. I do hear a low D, but I think that's a different voice. Quick few things from me: - Do you want to include rests for the vocal line in m16 like you do elsewhere? It is a bit unwieldy to write here, though, with the Layer 1 stems... - In m64 RH, there's an Eb grace note before the C grace note on beat 4 that you might consider including. - In m65, the En is doubled an octave up on beat 1, if you wanted to include that in the RH. - In m69, I hear the guitar melody play an additional F# on beat 2 (right before the F# you already have written in). Also, to my ear the D on beat 4.5 sounds like it's held, not re-articulated on beat 5, but it's hard to make out exactly, so there's room for interpretation there. - Ehh, I don't like the way m78 is written out... From a glance, it looks like the dotted quarter and the eighth in the second half of the measure belong to the same line. Maybe flip the dotted quarter down? - Obligatory have-to-mention-at-least-once: I think the m81 dynamic could be moved up slightly to be better centered with the crescendo. Looks good otherwise. Great song and great sheet! |