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#81

Submissions / Re: [3DS] StreetPass Mii Plaza...

Last post by cashwarrior1 - April 05, 2025, 03:02:45 PM

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#82

Submissions / [3DS] StreetPass Mii Plaza - "...

Last post by Zeta - April 05, 2025, 03:02:24 PM

Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: StreetPass Mii Plaza
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Captive Mii
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Cashwarrior1

#83

Submissions / Re: [PC] Minecraft - "Creator"...

Last post by cashwarrior1 - April 05, 2025, 02:58:02 PM

I haven't heard this one yet! It's very Lena Raine lol

• The tempo at the beginning is quarter note = 89, I'd also put the ritard in m4 since it's a longer slow down.
• In these music box sections in m1-m8 and m141-end, the LH plays a grace note earlier. You could just add a grace note and tie it to the quarter notes, or put a performance note about it.
• m13, 15, etc lh b3.5 - The strings play an E here.
• m20 lh - I think the bass not being here loses a bit of momentum, omitting the dyad in b1 for the bass works fine imo but that is up to you. I'm hearing the bass play Bn on b3 and that could be included below the third.
• m27 lh b1 - I'm hearing Cn.
• m35, 36 rh - I'm hearing these eighth notes as quarter-eighth triplets.
• m37-42 lh - The notes on the downbeats could be down an octave (maybe m39 and m40 are fine) to match the original. Also all the upbeats have harmonies, though I'm not sure what you're currently notating (I'm assuming its the string parts, but why is it only one note then?).
• m39-40, 55-56 rh - These are harmonized by thirds below
• m43 - I'm not sure why the 2nd layer is in the treble clef, it'll be easier to read in the bass clef. Is b3 layer 2 supposed to be played by the rh or the lh? You could also put the dotted half En in the lh.
• m46, 50 lh - Again, I think the lack of bass on beat 1 loses momentum here, and this time it feels more interrupting of the waltz rhythm. b3 I'm hearing Bn. I also think the Bn on b2 distracts from the D#-B movement and should harmonize b2 with a third above instead.
• m50 rh b3 - I'm hearing this as staccato.
• m51 rh b3.5 - I'm hearing this as an eighth triplet.
• m51, 52 lh - b1 I think this can have an octave above and b2 and b3 should be lowered an octave. Then since the synth bass goes low you can harmonize m52 with an octave below.
• m53-60 rh - The original is down an octave and I"m assuming you put it up because this section is lighter? I think it should stay in the original octave and making this section pianissimo would communicate that (or an expressive note if you wanna be fancy lol).
• m53-58 lh - Same comments as m37-42 except since this part is lighter it's fine to leave the bass where it's at (plus, moving it down in that earlier section will make this feel lighter by comparison).
• m59-60 lh b2-3 - I'm hearing G#-B dyads in 59 and E-G# dyads in 60.
• m64-66 rh - m64 b2 should be staccato, m65 b3 should not be staccato, m66 b3 should be staccato.
• m65-66 lh - Any reason the upbeats aren't harmonized like the rest of the section?
• m68 rh b1 - I'm hearing C-D grace notes.

Right, that's all I got for now. I'll look at the cool drop section at a later time.

#84

Submissions / Re: [PC] OneShot - "The Prophe...

Last post by Francesca - April 05, 2025, 05:36:53 AM

I'm hearing more/different notes for all the chords:
 - m1 An below the En
 - m5 The entire chord an octave above with an En on top (it should stay in the same octave as the previous one)
 - m9 En above the Bn
 - m13 Cn below the Gn
m17 rh b1 - This pad instrument is playing chords and I'm hearing a E minor. The melody doesn't seem to play the Cn here.
m19 rh b1 - Hearing a Cmaj7 chord.
m23 rh b1 - I'm hearing an An instead of Gn and En below that.

Ok, I made these changes! I always try to listen closely to the chords when writing arrangements, but it's still very difficult for me to find all the exact notes...

Any particular reason the lh in m17 to the end is not down an octave like the rest?

I made it that way simply because I thought it would have been too low otherwise.

Thanks for the feedback!

#85

Submissions / Re: [PC] OneShot - "Phosphor" ...

Last post by Whoppybones - April 04, 2025, 08:16:40 PM

I think you're right about m32.
For the harmony measures, they seem a bit cluttered still but I don't know a better way to do it. I'll have to defer to others with more experience.
For the bass... It seems better, but still not right. Again, though, I don't know a better way to do it. I will also defer that to others who are more familiar with chord progressions and arranging in general.

I'm excited to see where this goes! I may play this song once it gets completed.

#86

Home-Made Compositions / Re: Dekkadeci's Compositions

Last post by Dekkadeci - April 04, 2025, 04:35:16 PM

Made this fun and energetic piece - it's Beach Capers!

#87

The Werewolf Game / Re: Mafia Championship: Season...

Last post by BlackDragonSlayer - April 03, 2025, 10:54:25 PM

Pinging @Toby and @mastersuperfan here for visibility

#88

Submissions / Re: [NDS] Luminous Arc - "Prel...

Last post by Static - April 03, 2025, 06:46:46 PM

This is such a soothing piece!

I know right? Even in just 9 bars it has so much of that Mitsuda feeling to it.

In beat 4 of measure 4, I hear a G in the right hand rather than an E.

Did you mean measure 3? If so, I also hear G there, fixed.

Not a suggested change, just something I'm curious about: in measures 5 and 7, why did you use grace notes rather than a mordent?

Good question; grace notes without a slash are meant to be played before the beat rather than on the beat like a mordent would. In the original track, the Eb and F are played before the next Eb in both RH and LH are played together. Hopefully that sort of makes sense

Thanks for checking! The new files are up now.

#89

Submissions / Re: [PS4] Final Fantasy VII Re...

Last post by Static - April 03, 2025, 06:38:21 PM

m182 & m190 & 198 I'm not hearing the Gn
m187 & 195 I'm hearing Cn with the Gn, this might be undertones
m191 & 199 Again I can hear a Cn
m192 & m200 I don't hear an F# here.
m199 I don't hear a Bb

I still hear those spots as I have written. It's a bit harder to hear under the other instruments in m190/198 but it's the exact same string part as m177-184.

m209-216 What are your thought's on dropping some of the LH notes to add in some of the horns. I think that would add more to the build up.

The driving pedal bass is a large part of what gives m177-216 its sense of tension, which is then released in m217. I'd rather prioritize that than the harmony.

m229 I think I hear the Dn written on b3.25 come in before the Horns. Could just be really slow attack of the horns

No, that sounds right to me. The horns come in right on beat 4, and in m221 too. Fixed that, good catch.

m247 I'm hearing a Gn in the LH not Fn. I also think the roll down to the bottom Cn is also too much to play at tempo.

The Fn is a little tough to hear but I'm still hearing it there as part of that C7sus4, same as m239. Adjusted the LH to make it a bit more manageable.

m290-291 I'm hearing some significant add2 (En) in this chord.

Me too, added.

In addition to the above changes, I also added the in-game transition from phase 2-3 as an option since it ended up being pretty trivial to add.

Thanks for the feedback! New files are up.

#90

Piano Arrangements / King Glook's Piano Arrangement...

Last post by King Glook - April 03, 2025, 05:03:17 PM

I arrange lots of music from Tears of the Kingdom and the Splatoon series for solo piano. However, I am a Musescore user who does not have the Finale software, so I will not be able to provide any .mus files. I also do not know how to add the pdf/midi file download links to stuff so I will just include links to the pages on Musescore. (You should be able to download the pdf and midi files from the Musescore pages though) If any of the links are not working, please let me know!

I do plan on submitting these scores to NinSheetMusic, so constructive criticism would be really great 

Tears of the Kingdom:
Dragon Tear
Skydiving
Zelda's Wish
Critical Decisions
Link's House
Building Link's House
Light Dragon Flies Overhead
Light Dragon Sheds Final Tear
An Unfamiliar World
Great Deku Tree Restored
Rauru's Farewell

Splatoon 2 & 3
Countdown to Hairmageddon
Crater Eighters Routine
#11 above
Flop to It
With Flying Colors
Unconscience

Also I have a couple of arrangements from BotW:
Deer Hunting / Mounted Archery Minigame
Link's Memories: Father and Daughter
Challenging the Champ
Link's Memories: Subdued Ceremony
Link's Memories: The Master Sword
Recital at Warbler's Nest
Mind the Flowers!

Just so you know, this are most of the scores that I have finished (although constructive criticism is still awesome), but I am currently working on about four times this many scores from TotK and Splatoon.