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QuoteDid you give this some thought and decide to write in parentheses in the left hand? I think it might still be a bit much at the end of m. 14, but otherwise I suppose the overlap is not too intrusive. (The parentheses in m. 8 beat 3.5 isn't necessary.)
Quote from: TheZeldaPianist275 on March 20, 2024, 06:52:16 AMTWG: Rock, Paper, ScissorsMy only suggestion to modify this game is to make it so that each person can only be revived once; otherwise, you can end up in a situation where one faction is able to dominate by being able to revive over and over again (especially if someone is able to trick another faction's reviver into reviving someone from their own team rather than the reviver's team).
Quote from: Latios212 on March 15, 2024, 06:06:39 PMThe main thing I have to say is that I'm not convinced by all the overlapping parenthesized notes in m. 8+. It can be difficult to pick out what's supposed to be a different voice when everything is solo piano, but I think having so many of these notes in close proximity is going to make it kind of confusing for the player what to prioritize with what hand. I think my recommendation would be as follows:Did you give this some thought and decide to write in parentheses in the left hand? I think it might still be a bit much at the end of m. 14, but otherwise I suppose the overlap is not too intrusive. (The parentheses in m. 8 beat 3.5 isn't necessary.)
- If the top staff parenthesized note is struck noticeably louder than the LH voice, then consider it part of the melody, and have the right hand play it. The left hand could use parentheses, but I would probably suggest writing in a rest instead.
- If the top staff parenthesized note isn't struck louder, leave it in the left hand and omit it in the right hand instead.
Thoughts?
Quote from: Latios212 on March 15, 2024, 06:06:39 PM- The beat 2.5 E in measure 7 doesn't need to be cross-staffed at all, that'd be clearer and cleaner on the lower staff. I'd also suggest writing the G in the left hand on the lower staff as well, leaving the RH to only roll an octave on the top staff.Make sure the G is removed from the right hand, and since we're using pedal here you don't need to tie the E over into beat 3.
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