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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Splatoon 2
Console: Nintendo Switch
Title: Defeat- Jingle/Ink Another Day
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: BrainyLucario

[BrainyLucario]

[Libera]

Defeat-Jingle

-I'm not hearing the A Ab G line in bar 1 that you've written in.
-In bar 2 on the dotted minim there should be a Cn and a Gb and no Gn.
-I'm also not convinced on the rhythm you've written out here.  I can give suggestions if you'd like, but I don't think the way it's currently written is working.


Ink Another Day

Main thing here is the chords.  I'm not sure that alternating D major C# minor is what's going on here.  I'd take another look at them.


I'll have another check when you've updated the files.

[BrainyLucario]

I’m open to the suggestion. I’m having a terrible time figuring it out

[Khunjund]

The chords for Ink Another Day are: E7sus4 > F#min7/E > E7sus4 > Esus2 > D(add9)/F# > C#min7/G# > B7sus4 > Amaj9.

[Khunjund]

As for the defeat jingle, there is indeed a C natural in the second chord of measure 2 (personally, I'd place it in the right hand, but it can also work in the left), and the rythm in measure 2 sounds more like a quarter and an eighth in a triplet to me, with the eighth tied to the following dotted half note.

I'm not hearing the A Ab G line in bar 1 that you've written in.

You can't really make it out, but I think it's clear from the sound that these are power chords, in which case this line is definitely present. However, the Bb in measure 2 should get the same treatment, so the upper left hand note should be an F, not Gb.

[BrainyLucario]

Got it. I’ll work on this as soon as I can

[Libera]

Bump for arranger.

[Brassman388]

Superbump for arranger

[Libera]

Going to archive this for inactivity.  Feel free to resubmit whenever you want to.