[GBC] Hamtaro: Ham-Hams Unite! - "Clubhouse Rooms 1" by Altissimo

Started by Zeta, October 22, 2018, 03:21:20 AM

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Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Hamtaro: Ham-Hams Unite!
Console: Game Boy Color
Title: Clubhouse Rooms 1
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Altissimo

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I love a short sheet.

-Main thing here is that I'd go to 2 bars per system here.  We've got the space to fill and everything looks quite cramped at the moment, especially with all the fiddly rhythms.
-Also all (or nearly all anyway) of the bars need re-spacing, just have finale to do it for you.
-Since you're slurring the dotted quaver in bar 7 RH onto the next semiquaver, is a tenuto really necessary?
-I had more things to say when I first looked at the sheet, but when I fiddled with the measure distribution those things they stopped being a problem.  Goes to show how useful getting measure distribution right is!

Notes look fine on this.  Good work!

Latios212

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Altissimo

sure, fixed the stuff lol

i was considering 2 measure distribution at first but thought it was TOO spacey, guess not lol


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