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Author Topic: [NES] Bomberman - "Stage Theme" by Jacopo Tore & Alessio Corrias  (Read 211 times)

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[NES] Bomberman - "Stage Theme" by Jacopo Tore & Alessio Corrias
« on: November 23, 2018, 08:40:59 PM »

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Bomberman
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Stage Theme
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arrangers: Jacopo Tore & Alessio Corrias
« Last Edit: December 11, 2018, 12:47:15 AM by Latios212 »
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Re: [NES] Bomberman - "Stage Theme" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #1 on: November 23, 2018, 08:41:29 PM »

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Re: [NES] Bomberman - "Stage Theme" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #2 on: November 23, 2018, 08:46:52 PM »

https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?topic=9837.30

- Who's Gabriele Sechi and why are they listed as an arranger? If they are a co-arranger, it needs to be noted in our system as well.

- Gabriele Sechi is one of my students, I assigned him the task of transcribing this piece under my supervision; unfortunately he is a minor then (according to the laws of my state) I had to ask permission to parents to be able to insert and publish his name and surname in the score (I got this permission), if he must create an account to be accredited as arranger then I can create one for him or ask the mother if she can handle it.

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Quote from: JacopoTore on March 25, 2018, 07:22:57 PM

    if he must create an account to be accredited as arranger then I can create one for him or ask the mother if she can handle it.

Yup, for our system to log multiple arrangers on the main site correctly there needs to be an associated account for each arranger, so having him get an account would be swell.



-I can make an addition for an arranger that doesn't have a forum account. Originally that was intended just to be used for old sheets from before the site crash but it's not necessarily limited to that. Up to you.

-I think this is the best choice (creating an account is not a school task). Thank you


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The same for Alessio Corrias
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Re: [NES] Bomberman - "Stage Theme" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #3 on: December 03, 2018, 06:20:25 PM »

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Re: [NES] Bomberman - "Stage Theme" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #4 on: December 06, 2018, 09:44:08 PM »

Hi, there is some problem with this score?
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Re: [NES] Bomberman - "Stage Theme" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #5 on: December 06, 2018, 11:01:57 PM »

Personally, I would've put this in 2/4 time, but it works fine in 4/4 as well. The one issue I see is that the left hand in the first beat of measure 1 isn't grouped, whereas the first beats of every other measure are.

Maybe it could be possible to write this with only one line using cross-staff notation, but I don't know if it's worth the effort.

Don't worry, you're not the only one who has to wait an eternity before having your submissions acknowledged by the updaters.
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Re: [NES] Bomberman - "Stage Theme" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #6 on: December 06, 2018, 11:08:46 PM »

XD
Thank you.
Administrator confirm the changes?
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Re: [NES] Bomberman - "Stage Theme" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #7 on: December 07, 2018, 06:30:02 AM »

Administrator confirm the changes?

You don't always need an updater to confirm simple changes. A lot of feedback in these here submissions comes from other regular arrangers, and it's best just to utilize it unless an updater shows up to say otherwise.

And as far as what D3ath has said regarding things to fix, I agree with it. Go ahead and update the files for now; this will get officially checked eventually. (In the mean time, why not get a Personal Arrangements topic going, to store more sheets for submitting in the future?)
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Re: [NES] Bomberman - "Stage Theme" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #8 on: December 08, 2018, 12:33:35 AM »

Administrator confirm the changes?

-Definitely change the beaming in the first bar to match the other three.  Also change the first two semiquaver rests in bar 2 to a quaver rest like you have in all of the other bars.
-The cross staffing is something you could do if you want to, but I don't particularly mind either way.
-I hear an A# at the end of bar 4 rather than an An as you have written.
-For consistency's sake, either go with 1) 'Composed by ___' and 'Arranged by ___' or  2) 'Composition by ___' and 'Arrangement by ___'.



The same for Alessio Corrias

This will need either Deku's or Latios' attention I believe.



That's all I've got, nice stuff.

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Re: [NES] Bomberman - "Stage Theme" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #9 on: December 08, 2018, 09:28:27 PM »

You don't always need an updater to confirm simple changes. A lot of feedback in these here submissions comes from other regular arrangers, and it's best just to utilize it unless an updater shows up to say otherwise.

And as far as what D3ath has said regarding things to fix, I agree with it. Go ahead and update the files for now; this will get officially checked eventually. (In the mean time, why not get a Personal Arrangements topic going, to store more sheets for submitting in the future?)
Thank you, this is a good suggestion, I have no problem if we need to wait many time to have a simple reply,  the problem is that I have more than two arrangements (simple and difficult) transcribed from my students and I remember that I can't add more than 2 per time. But I need to wait too many months to be accepted and wait other time to "clean" the MSN PANEL; I asked how to add more than two arrangements, if I'm not mistaken they told me that I had to become "composer" but they did not explain how.
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Re: [NES] Bomberman - "Stage Theme" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #10 on: December 08, 2018, 09:29:43 PM »

-Definitely change the beaming in the first bar to match the other three.  Also change the first two semiquaver rests in bar 2 to a quaver rest like you have in all of the other bars.
-The cross staffing is something you could do if you want to, but I don't particularly mind either way.
-I hear an A# at the end of bar 4 rather than an An as you have written.
-For consistency's sake, either go with 1) 'Composed by ___' and 'Arranged by ___' or  2) 'Composition by ___' and 'Arrangement by ___'.



This will need either Deku's or Latios' attention I believe.



That's all I've got, nice stuff.
I don't know why I forget that A#, thank you for your suggestions!
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Re: [NES] Bomberman - "Stage Theme" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #11 on: December 08, 2018, 09:44:33 PM »

I don't know why I forget that A#, thank you for your suggestions!

Happy to help!  Looks good.

Thank you, this is a good suggestion, I have no problem if we need to wait many time to have a simple reply,  the problem is that I have more than two arrangements (simple and difficult) transcribed from my students and I remember that I can't add more than 2 per time. But I need to wait too many months to be accepted and wait other time to "clean" the MSN PANEL; I asked how to add more than two arrangements, if I'm not mistaken they told me that I had to become "composer" but they did not explain how.

You currently only have one sheet in submissions, so if you'd like to add a second one feel free to do so.  The only people who can submit more than two sheets at a time are updaters, but this is purely for the purposes of being able to submit sheets on other people's behalf.

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Re: [NES] Bomberman - "Stage Theme" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #12 on: December 08, 2018, 11:26:20 PM »

Final thoughts:
- Go ahead and align the dynamic in the center of the staff.
- Change the link to "https" instead of "http" (I'll have to check on this...).
- I'd recommend a courtesy accidental on the G in M. 2.
- I'd also recommend putting the arrangers in two lines so it's not crawling up under the titles.

Nice work.
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Re: [NES] Bomberman - "Stage Theme" by Jacopo Tore
« Reply #13 on: December 09, 2018, 06:03:02 PM »

Final thoughts:
- Go ahead and align the dynamic in the center of the staff.
- Change the link to "https" instead of "http" (I'll have to check on this...).
- I'd recommend a courtesy accidental on the G in M. 2.
- I'd also recommend putting the arrangers in two lines so it's not crawling up under the titles.

Nice work.

Thank you Sebastian! Your are cool!
Can I submit another arrangement?
This will be by Gabriele Sechi (also added as arranger in the site).
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Re: [NES] Bomberman - "Stage Theme" by Jacopo Tore & Alessio Corrias
« Reply #14 on: December 11, 2018, 12:47:43 AM »

Can I submit another arrangement?
You currently only have one sheet in submissions, so if you'd like to add a second one feel free to do so.

Added the arranger info into the system. Accepting now!
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