[NDS] Mario & Luigi: Bowser's Inside Story - "Dimble Wood (Inside Bowser)" by ThatHiddenCharacter

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Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Mario & Luigi: Bowser's Inside Story
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Dimble Wood (Inside Bowser)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: ThatHiddenCharacter

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[ThatHiddenCharacter]

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Nice sheet, here, just a few small things:

• All the grace notes should preferably be 16th note grace notes because there are more than 2, and there should be a slur on them leading to the main note.
• I would put this sheet in cut time personally, leaving all note values the same. The actual feel/pace of the song isn't quite as frantic as q=194.
• There is a quarter note on beat 4 of m20 and 24 (RH). The two flutes are playing an F and D in both of those spots.

[ThatHiddenCharacter]

Alright! I've updated the files with the edits.

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Oops, one more thing I just caught now: The title on the sheet says "Bowser's Inside Stroy". You might want to fix that lol

All the other changes look fantastic.

[ThatHiddenCharacter]

"Bowser's Inside Stroy"

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I can't type for my life.

Doesn't help that I can't wear my glasses with my headphones, thanks for pointing that out. (Not that I can't read without them, I probably wouldn't have noticed with my glasses on, either.)

Files have been updated.

[Latios212]

Nice work, just a few comments from me!

- Header and footer information are all outside the set page margins.
- Grace notes in m. 21 should be facing upwards.

Other suggestions: flip the slur in m. 37 upwards to indicate that the phrase ends on the B and not the F# whole note, and perhaps include a Bn in measure 38 since Bb was used in a similar-looking place the measure before.

Here's a file with the above edits you can use!

[ThatHiddenCharacter]

Alright, I've updated the files.

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This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot