[ARCADE] Mushihimesama - "To Shinju Forest - Stage1" by Static

Started by Zeta, February 03, 2019, 06:29:38 PM

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Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Mushihimesama
Console: ARCADE
Title: To Shinju Forest - Stage1
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Static

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Latios212

Haha this piece is quite something...

- "Stage 1" instead of "Stage1"? I don't know why the OST lists it like that...
- A few places we can clean up slurs a bit: m. 9 first one, m. 25 first one, m. 46 lower one, m. 54 lower one.
- Would it be worth it to have a key change at m. 27? There are a lot of accidentals in this long transitiony section.

Otherwise looks good to me :J
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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Static

Fixed the slurs (also in m59-62). Also added a missing ff in m51. I think I'm going to keep the m27 section as it is because it doesn't really stay in one particular key for long. Like you said, it's more of just a really long transition.

For the title, I thought it was weird too, but if you look at all the official soundtrack releases and official remix albums, they all remove the spaces there (like Stage3 or LastBoss). I figured it's more of a weird stylistic choice than a mistake, so I left it.

Latios212

My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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Maelstrom

Where do you even find these songs

I could hear a few inconsistencies with the bassline throughout the piece, but including all the weird stuff would make it even less playable and pianistic. Up to you on that.
The only real exception to this was m35-42 LH. It could easily be livened up a bit by including the percussion's beat. I mean, it's nicer to play than straight octave quarter notes.

Address this and I'll approve as well.

Static

I edited m35-42 to include the kick drum part. I still wanted that section to be lighter and emptier than other sections, but I think the added rhythm gives it a little more drive.

Maelstrom

For some reason, the midi is the same ....
otherwise, looks good.

Static


Latios212

My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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