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[N64] Paper Mario - "Toad Town Variations" by Sebastian

Started by Zeta, February 09, 2019, 12:49:15 PM

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The Deku Trombonist

I think the track name would go better above the musical direction. Think of it in order of precedence (since we read from top to bottom):

1) What am I playing?
2) How is it supposed to be played?


You don't usually ask "How is it supposed to be played?" and then ask "What am I playing?" afterwards. That would be very bizarre indeed!!

Sebastian

Thanks for the suggestion. The sheet has been updated to reflect that change.



Libera

Looks generally pretty good, just a few things:

Rowf's Badge Shop:
It's pretty easy to miss, but I think bars 1 and 2 are missing some notes.  I hear this:
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Tayce T's Theme:
There's a slightly off rhythm in the left hand of bar 5; this is what I can hear:
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Libera

We had a chat about this over discord, and Sebastian agreed to make these edits but he appears to be busy at the moment so I've made them for him.

Accepted!

Zeta

This submission has been accepted by Libera.

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