[SWITCH] Octopath Traveler - "River of Life" by Latios212

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Octopath Traveler
Console: Nintendo Switch
Title: River of Life
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Latios212

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[Latios212]

hello I am back with more octopath

[Libera]

More OT yay.

-Not something I usually have to say, but the tempo is more around 80bpm than 76.
-You bring the strings in for bars 30-31 but afterwards they drop out.  I understand that it's difficult to add them as heard, but you can probably just introduce harmony beneath the melody line to keep the same weight and texture up to the end of the sheet.  Particularly the E-> F# movement in 33-34 is quite nice.
-A diminuendo in the final bar, perhaps?

I think that's it, this looks super nice!

[Latios212]

Ah yes. I think I meant to revisit the harmonies there, but forgot to. I've added in a bit more on some of the downbeats, hopefully that's better now

Got the other two things, thanks! Not sure how I messed up the tempo....

[Libera]

Brilliant, looks great!  Approved.

[Sebastian]

Oh dude...this song looks great!

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Sebastian.

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