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Author Topic: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Ringside" by WaluigiTime64  (Read 158 times)

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[Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Ringside" by WaluigiTime64
« on: April 12, 2019, 01:14:10 PM »

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Series: Rhythm Heaven
Game: Rhythm Heaven Fever
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Ringside
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: WaluigiTime64
« Last Edit: July 12, 2019, 02:07:46 AM by WaluigiTime64 »
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Ringside" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #1 on: April 12, 2019, 01:15:14 PM »


I know I've recently been really out of it when it comes to sheet music, and because of that expect slow responses, but I saw that tiny little Rhythm Heaven section and felt like making it a little less... tiny. So here's something I had lying around.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Ringside" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #2 on: May 01, 2019, 12:29:16 PM »

Hey, really nice work! Just a few little things I noticed:

-In m. 2 (and 31), the d in the melody is quite far from the g in the accompaniment above it; I'd either remove the quarter note in the accompaniment, or move the g an octave down.
-In the original, the melody from m. 5 to m. 12 is an octave higher (like you have it after m. 12). Did you have a reason for moving it an octave down?
-I believe there's a second voice that's playing c#'s alongside the melody in m. 10
-Maybe a bit picky, but I'd move the subtitle and arranger text a bit higher, because it feels a little bit too far down for me. You decide if that's relevant or not lol

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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Ringside" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #3 on: July 12, 2019, 02:13:46 AM »

Hey, really nice work! Just a few little things I noticed:
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-In m. 2 (and 31), the d in the melody is quite far from the g in the accompaniment above it; I'd either remove the quarter note in the accompaniment, or move the g an octave down.
It's intended to be pedaled, though maybe it's not clear enough on the sheet? If other people yell at me to make it more obvious I'll probably do it.

-In the original, the melody from m. 5 to m. 12 is an octave higher (like you have it after m. 12). Did you have a reason for moving it an octave down?
I kinda liked it being there, particularly because the timbre of the lead sounds deeper than it actually is, and it suited the piece nicely. It also helps with the next point.

-I believe there's a second voice that's playing c#'s alongside the melody in m. 10
Correct. I've been gotten.
I've added the second voice above the current one, because that's where it is originally (I think?), and it prevents a unison harmony on the last note. 

-Maybe a bit picky, but I'd move the subtitle and arranger text a bit higher, because it feels a little bit too far down for me. You decide if that's relevant or not lol
Did this anyway, because I agree. :V



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