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Author Topic: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row 2" by ThatHiddenCharacter  (Read 235 times)

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Series: Rhythm Heaven
Game: Rhythm Heaven Fever
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Micro-Row 2
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: ThatHiddenCharacter
« Last Edit: July 22, 2019, 02:13:32 AM by ThatHiddenCharacter »
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row 2" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #1 on: June 21, 2019, 10:20:07 PM »

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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row 2" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #2 on: June 26, 2019, 06:36:06 PM »

Nice work once again!
  • m17-18 I know it would look weird, but I think it would be better to notate the RH notes as dotted quarter notes (and beat 3 of m18 as a regular quarter note) to emphasize the spaces between them
  • m29-34 I think it is worth adding the harmonies to the RH
  • m37+ I think you can experiment more with the LH to get a more dynamic sound. This is just a mix of the two guitar parts, and you can take it as an example of what you could do:
  • m65 It might be better to just leave out the F
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row 2" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #3 on: June 26, 2019, 07:47:33 PM »

  • m29-34 I think it is worth adding the harmonies to the RH
If you're referring to the harmony in the other Micro-Row sheet in that section, it isn't present in this song. The harmony was played by an electric organ instrument in the background that isn't in the sequel song and the main synth instrument doesn't play it either. As for everything else, I'll get to it as soon as I can.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row 2" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #4 on: June 27, 2019, 02:44:57 PM »

    • m29-34 I think it is worth adding the harmonies to the RH
    If you're referring to the harmony in the other Micro-Row sheet in that section, it isn't present in this song. The harmony was played by an electric organ instrument in the background that isn't in the sequel song and the main synth instrument doesn't play it either. As for everything else, I'll get to it as soon as I can.
    Actually no, it's still there. Exactly the same as it was before.
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    Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row 2" by ThatHiddenCharacter
    « Reply #5 on: June 27, 2019, 07:03:43 PM »

    Actually no, it's still there. Exactly the same as it was before.
    Wow, I must be deaf or something. I swear I listened really closely multiple times to make sure it wasn't there, but I just listened again and heard it. I guess I'll re-add the harmony then.
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    Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row 2" by ThatHiddenCharacter
    « Reply #6 on: July 01, 2019, 04:52:55 AM »

    While making the edits, I noticed that the bassline in m59-60 and m63-64 actually does the same riff as the guitar (although it's actually different in m64), so I edited that accordingly as well as all the other feedback. The files have been updated.
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    Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row 2" by ThatHiddenCharacter
    « Reply #7 on: July 20, 2019, 03:46:02 AM »

    This looks really good, I'm loving your attention to detail on the articulations and note lengths and everything. Just a few more things:

    • m1: Move the mezzoforte to the left just a bit so it's centered with the first beat.
    • m23, 27: The F naturals technically should be E#s since its a chromatic approaching note to F#; but since this piece is pretty bluesy and uses a lot of F naturals I have no issues with you keeping them.
    • m27 RH beat 1: I would put a staccato here.
    • m35-36 RH: I hear this instead (also move the crescendo down a bit):
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    • m55 RH Beat 3: I would remove the staccato on this note and maybe even add a slur to better differentiate this specific note's length compared to the others.
    • m60 RH Beat 3.5: There is another C natural here, but if you want to leave it out to better separate the melody on beat 4 that's fine as well.

    That's all I got, great work.

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    Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Micro-Row 2" by ThatHiddenCharacter
    « Reply #8 on: July 22, 2019, 02:19:11 AM »

    • m23, 27: The F naturals technically should be E#s since its a chromatic approaching note to F#; but since this piece is pretty bluesy and uses a lot of F naturals I have no issues with you keeping them.
    I was actually already planning on making this edit, I was just waiting for more feedback first. You happened to be the more feedback.

    • m60 RH Beat 3.5: There is another C natural here, but if you want to leave it out to better separate the melody on beat 4 that's fine as well.
    So, I actually did that because of some feedback I got on my Micro-Row arrangement, back when it was still in submissions, that literally said to do the exact opposite, so I edited this one the same way, since the situation was nearly identical, so I think I'm gonna keep it that way. I do know the guitar is still playing a C natural there.

    I've updated the files with the edits.
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