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Author Topic: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack  (Read 157 times)

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Series: Banjo-Kazooie
Game: Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge
Console: Game Boy Advance
Title: Breegull Beach
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Jack
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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #1 on: April 13, 2019, 12:33:24 AM »

Here's the song -
     
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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #2 on: April 23, 2019, 01:49:13 AM »

Hey I was just browsing around a bit and was going to take a quick look at this - but I noticed your other submission with feedback on it was deleted - https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?topic=10678.0

Was that your doing?
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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #3 on: April 25, 2019, 08:55:39 PM »

Yes, I decided I'd scrap that project for now, so I didn't want it cluttering up this page.  If that's no good, I apologize, but yes - I did it.
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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #4 on: April 30, 2019, 12:07:56 AM »

That's fine if you would like to shelf it for now, but please give some indication of doing so in the future! Deleting it silently can leave our updaters rather confused and feeling rather unwanted, as the feedback they're giving is seemingly ignored.
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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #5 on: May 05, 2019, 01:26:49 AM »

Anyway, aside from the above, this looks pretty solid, though I do have a few important things to suggest before we get into the nitty-gritty of checking notes and cleaning up the formatting:

- You have sharps written in a lot of places. These should mostly be flats - take a look at the harmony to make sense of what you wrote. For example, the first half of measure 14 is an A flat chord. Consult step 4 of this guide for details and feel free to ask if you're confused.
- Think about your staccatos and note lengths a bit. In most places it's fine but I would advise against using staccato'd dotted eighth notes. Consider replacing instances of those with an eighth followed by a sixteenth rest.
- Notes within each beat should be beamed together - for instance the last two left hand notes in measure 3.
« Last Edit: May 05, 2019, 01:29:08 AM by Latios212 »
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