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Author Topic: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Halberd" by Zeila  (Read 170 times)

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[Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Halberd" by Zeila
« on: May 10, 2019, 06:46:44 AM »

Submission Information:

Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby's Epic Yarn
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Halberd
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Zeila
« Last Edit: May 17, 2019, 11:45:44 PM by Zeila »
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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Halberd" by Zeila
« Reply #1 on: May 10, 2019, 06:50:16 AM »

The repeated section is intentionally repeated instead of written out with the extra harmonies to make it easier to play and to save space
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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Halberd" by Zeila
« Reply #2 on: May 10, 2019, 11:11:12 PM »

I was hoping you'd submit this! I really like this sheet, excellent work.
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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Halberd" by Zeila
« Reply #3 on: May 11, 2019, 12:23:09 AM »

Thank you! It's about time I did it since I've been meaning to do it for a while now...

Also, I noticed that I forgot to update m5 so I went ahead and got rid of the 2nd layer and changed some notes
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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Halberd" by Zeila
« Reply #4 on: May 11, 2019, 05:31:16 AM »

I don't know why, but I tried opening your .mus in Finale Notepad 2012 and I kept getting dissonant tubular bells/chimes-like sounds instead of piano.

Actually, I also checked your MIDI and it also sounds like (less dissonant) tubular bells/chimes. As a result, I can't confirm whether your accompaniment sounds accurate, especially its low notes.
« Last Edit: May 11, 2019, 05:34:37 AM by Dekkadeci »
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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Halberd" by Zeila
« Reply #5 on: May 11, 2019, 06:33:36 AM »

It's fixed now!
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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Halberd" by Zeila
« Reply #6 on: May 11, 2019, 08:38:25 PM »

Yup, sounds fixed now!

Dunno whether it's just Finale Notepad 2012, but the staccatos on the left-hand B flats in Bars 23-26 are touching their respective notes in the .mus, regardless of whether the music is playing. (When the music is playing, the stems of the notes with tremolos flip upside down, to the detriment of readability.) On Page 3 of the .mus, the staccato of the left-hand G flat of Bar 30, the staccato in the right hand and the staccato and accent of the left hand of Bar 34, the last staccato of the right hand of Bar 35, the staccatos of both G's of the right hand of Bar 37, the staccato of the right hand of Bar 38, the staccato of the D and the tenuto of the right hand of Bar 39, the tenutos of the right hand of Bar 40, and all articulation markings of Bars 41-42 also suffer from the same problem.

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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Halberd" by Zeila
« Reply #7 on: May 11, 2019, 08:54:15 PM »

Yup, sounds fixed now!

Dunno whether it's just Finale Notepad 2012, but the staccatos on the left-hand B flats in Bars 23-26 are touching their respective notes in the .mus, regardless of whether the music is playing. (When the music is playing, the stems of the notes with tremolos flip upside down, to the detriment of readability.) On Page 3 of the .mus, the staccato of the left-hand G flat of Bar 30, the staccato in the right hand and the staccato and accent of the left hand of Bar 34, the last staccato of the right hand of Bar 35, the staccatos of both G's of the right hand of Bar 37, the staccato of the right hand of Bar 38, the staccato of the D and the tenuto of the right hand of Bar 39, the tenutos of the right hand of Bar 40, and all articulation markings of Bars 41-42 also suffer from the same problem.

It's finale v26.  The newest version of finale has some fancy articulation placement scheme that corrupts when opened in older finale versions.  It's not a big deal though, since people with v25 (like me) can reset them all very quickly.  I will do that with this sheet before it is accepted, but since it will corrupt again any time Zeila edits the file, there's no point me doing that until the end of the process.  You will notice this exact same problem on other submissions by people who use v26.

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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Halberd" by Zeila
« Reply #8 on: May 16, 2019, 09:23:03 PM »

Wow, this sheet is amazing.
  • I would extend the 8vas in m17 and m31 a tiny bit to the left to cover the first note entirely.
  • I think m15-16 should be notated with sextuplets instead of triplets because the notes are being played in groups of two, rather than in groups of three.
  • I would make the tremolo notes in m2 half notes, or tie them to untremolo'd quarter notes, so as to avoid the quarter-rest gap of silence that's there right now (that isn't in the original).
  • Maybe change the dynamic to mf for m5-6 since the instrumentation changes and it's a bit softer? (And then change back to forte in m7) Like how you change to mf in 19.
  • I think there are some right hand harmonies in m15-16 and m31-32 that are missing.
Overall, I love it! Really looking forward to seeing this one accepted.
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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Halberd" by Zeila
« Reply #9 on: May 17, 2019, 11:46:31 PM »

Wow, this sheet is amazing.
  • I would extend the 8vas in m17 and m31 a tiny bit to the left to cover the first note entirely.
Thank you! Done, and I even changed the other 8vas

  • I think there are some right hand harmonies in m15-16 and m31-32 that are missing.
If you're talking about the piano chords, I opted to go for the piano/xylophone melody part + the bass instead. I'm not hearing any harmonies that correlate to the melody part though if that's what you meant

I implemented the other stuff, and also changed the copyright url to https and added staccatos to the eighth notes in m41
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Re: [Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Halberd" by Zeila
« Reply #10 on: May 19, 2019, 11:32:03 PM »

I would also move the sign in m11 to be directly over the double barline. It's a little shifted to the right as is.
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