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[SWITCH] Xenoblade Chronicles 2 - "Loneliness" by Libera
« on: May 13, 2019, 12:08:48 AM »

Submission Information:

Series: Xeno
Game: Xenoblade Chronicles 2
Console: Nintendo Switch
Title: Loneliness
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Libera
« Last Edit: June 15, 2019, 09:30:54 PM by Libera »
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Re: [SWITCH] Xenoblade Chronicles 2 - "Loneliness" by Libera
« Reply #1 on: May 13, 2019, 12:08:54 AM »

Finally, by popular demand!  (Not really, Latios just keeps asking me to sub this haha.)

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Re: [SWITCH] Xenoblade Chronicles 2 - "Loneliness" by Libera
« Reply #2 on: May 19, 2019, 06:40:23 AM »

This is a beautiful piece, thanks for arranging it!

- m23 it sounds like there's a higher G nat in the left hand on beat 2
- m24 maybe you could add a low D in beat 1 (RH), but if I can understand not wanting to put one there
- m29 is there a reason why you omitted the F# in the LH chord?
- this is just me being picky, but I think the subtitle is a little too close to the title

Nice work overall!
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Re: [SWITCH] Xenoblade Chronicles 2 - "Loneliness" by Libera
« Reply #3 on: May 21, 2019, 04:51:53 PM »

This is a beautiful piece

Indeed it is!

- m23 it sounds like there's a higher G nat in the left hand on beat 2
- m24 maybe you could add a low D in beat 1 (RH), but if I can understand not wanting to put one there
- m29 is there a reason why you omitted the F# in the LH chord?

All great points!  After trying it out on the piano, I put the D in bar 24 into the left hand so that it resolves correctly and doesn't get in the way of the piano line too much.  I also added in a missing A in the left hand of bar 25 while I was here.

- this is just me being picky, but I think the subtitle is a little too close to the title

The spacing looks to me like the same as it is for all of my sheets and it doesn't look particularly close so I left it as is.

Nice work overall!

Thanks!  And thank you for taking the time to check it over.

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Re: [SWITCH] Xenoblade Chronicles 2 - "Loneliness" by Libera
« Reply #4 on: June 08, 2019, 06:04:39 PM »

Yay! Sorry for the wait, just a few minor things to call out.

- The first chord in m. 18 is rooted on an E at the bottom. I think the LH should be E-A
- I'm not really hearing the LH D on beat 2 of m. 18 although it makes sense where it is
- m. 24 first chord sound like G# on bottom
- Chord in m. 28 sounds like the wrong inversion, like it should have the B on bottom
- You could combine 8vas in m. 28-29
- Cross staff line between 29-30 like 25-26?
- m. 32 chord also sounds like it has an E on top
- Tied octave in m. 36 is at the wrong octave
- The downward rolled chord arrows could be adjusted a bit so that the vertical line of the arrow doesn't stick out from the wavy part at the bottom
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Re: [SWITCH] Xenoblade Chronicles 2 - "Loneliness" by Libera
« Reply #5 on: June 08, 2019, 07:13:38 PM »

New files!

- The first chord in m. 18 is rooted on an E at the bottom. I think the LH should be E-A

I added the E, but I don't think there's an A.  I think it's a holdover from a previous A that moves to a G# (perhaps slightly delayed).

- I'm not really hearing the LH D on beat 2 of m. 18 although it makes sense where it is

I think you meant bar 19, but yeah you're right; I was just imagining it I think.

- m. 24 first chord sound like G# on bottom

I agree, and it already was?  Maybe you meant something else though.

- Chord in m. 28 sounds like the wrong inversion, like it should have the B on bottom

I had another listen and it's root position as far as I can tell.

- You could combine 8vas in m. 28-29
- Cross staff line between 29-30 like 25-26?

Fixed.

- m. 32 chord also sounds like it has an E on top

I think so, and I added another one at bar 28 as well.

- Tied octave in m. 36 is at the wrong octave

Whoopsie.

- The downward rolled chord arrows could be adjusted a bit so that the vertical line of the arrow doesn't stick out from the wavy part at the bottom

Hopefully that looks better now!

Unrelated to the above, I also went through and rewrote some of the left hand to make it more clear how to pedal the piece.  This required some interesting stuff in bar 29, but I think that's as good as it can get really.

Thanks for checking!

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Re: [SWITCH] Xenoblade Chronicles 2 - "Loneliness" by Libera
« Reply #6 on: June 08, 2019, 07:19:46 PM »

I agree, and it already was?  Maybe you meant something else though.
oops disregard I can't read the key signature, the Gn in the previous measure threw me off, it's good

I had another listen and it's root position as far as I can tell.
Ah okay I can hear the root E but I think what was throwing me off was that it sounds like a G# on top. It's fine though

All good to go :P
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Re: [SWITCH] Xenoblade Chronicles 2 - "Loneliness" by Libera
« Reply #7 on: June 15, 2019, 09:25:54 PM »

I have one issue. m35 has been changed in such a way that the chord progression in the LH has been misrepresented. Here is the most literal transcription of it I could make:


fix this in a nice way and I'll approve as well

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Re: [SWITCH] Xenoblade Chronicles 2 - "Loneliness" by Libera
« Reply #8 on: June 15, 2019, 09:32:14 PM »

I have one issue. m35 has been changed in such a way that the chord progression in the LH has been misrepresented. Here is the most literal transcription of it I could make:

Very nice catch.  Though I do hear the F# on the first beat (it might not be in the piano though, but still worth including I think.)  Anyway, I've tinkered with that bar so hopefully it's better now.

Thanks for checking!

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Re: [SWITCH] Xenoblade Chronicles 2 - "Loneliness" by Libera
« Reply #9 on: June 16, 2019, 06:15:21 AM »

That works fine.

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Re: [SWITCH] Xenoblade Chronicles 2 - "Loneliness" by Libera
« Reply #10 on: June 16, 2019, 06:15:25 AM »

This submission has been accepted by Maelstrom.

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