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[PC] Deltarune - "Lancer" by ThatHiddenCharacter

Started by Zeta, March 05, 2019, 01:43:41 PM

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Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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Libera

Looks good to me, but could we drop the glissando in bar 17?  It doesn't feel very pianistic to me and despite its difficulty to perform I'm not convinced it really adds much anyway.  But yeah otherwise good stuff.

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So I went through this sheet closely, made a lot of revisions, and came out with this:

Edited Version

The biggest changes I made were fixing the bassline in the first half, fixing the Layer 2 harmonies in the second half, and changing the repeat to reflect how it loops in game. I also made some other small edits with courtesy accidentals, articulations, note lengths, and the like. (I worry if I might have overdone the courtesy accidentals in m5—you can look at that yourself if you want.) You can compare this to your previous version if you want to check all the differences, but rest assured that I went through the original track very carefully.

I was thinking about putting slurs on all the held note-staccato rhythms throughout the melody (like I did in the LH in m1, 3, and 5), but I felt like that would've taken up way too much space and cluttered up the sheet without adding much.

I think this updated version is good to go, but feel free to say if there are any changes to this version you still want to make.
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Thanks MSF for the help!

Quote from: Libera on April 22, 2019, 04:07:05 PMLooks good to me, but could we drop the glissando in bar 17?  It doesn't feel very pianistic to me and despite its difficulty to perform I'm not convinced it really adds much anyway.  But yeah otherwise good stuff.
This has been addressed in the latest revision.

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Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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