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[3DS] Monster Hunter Generations - "Meownster Hunters, Fire Away!" by Th3Gavst3r

Started by Zeta, June 30, 2019, 01:24:33 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Monster Hunter Generations
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Meownster Hunters, Fire Away!
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Th3Gavst3r

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Libera


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Libera

Checking it now!

-At the end of bars 22 and 26 I'm hearing more C -> F rather than A -> F in the bass movement.
-Some of the staccato placement in the first system is a bit uneven, so it's probably worth tidying up a bit.

Other than those small things, it looks great!  Nice work, and I look forward to seeing the credits version if you ever do it!

Latios212

Don't have much to add here ^^ I'd prefer if the beam was broken in the left hand of m. 20, but that's up to you.

Once the comments are addressed this has my seal of approval
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Quote from: Libera on June 30, 2019, 05:16:52 PM-At the end of bars 22 and 26 I'm hearing more C -> F rather than A -> F in the bass movement.
I changed m.22 to another chromatic approach like m.24 to make things simple.

Quote from: Libera on June 30, 2019, 05:16:52 PM-Some of the staccato placement in the first system is a bit uneven, so it's probably worth tidying up a bit.
The staccatos were aligned to the center of the note before, but I moved them over to make them look subjectively better.

Quote from: Latios212 on June 30, 2019, 06:55:32 PMDon't have much to add here ^^ I'd prefer if the beam was broken in the left hand of m. 20, but that's up to you.
Having a bunch of disconnected eighth notes/eighth rests make it really hard for me to keep track of where the beats are, so I prefer keeping the beaming in.


Zeta