[SNES] Super Mario RPG: Legend of the Seven Stars - "Dodo's Coming!!" (Replacement) by ThatHiddenCha

Started by Zeta, August 05, 2019, 08:59:04 PM

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Submission Information:

Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario RPG: Legend of the Seven Stars
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Dodo's Coming!!
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: ThatHiddenCharacter


Replacement Information:

Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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ThatHiddenCharacter


How do we change the name of a replacement submission? It's supposed to be called "Dodo's Coming!!".
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Quote from: ThatHiddenCharacter on August 05, 2019, 09:00:09 PMHow do we change the name of a replacement submission? It's supposed to be called "Dodo's Coming!!".

By letting us know and then one of the updaters can change it, which I have now done.  Thanks!

Static

Hey, I remember looking over this a long time ago! So, I've looked at it again:
  • I really don't have anything to say note-wise, everything checks out. The only thing I would change would be to move the D on beat 3 (3rd 8th note beat) to the LH. I think it feels just a bit more natural to play it like that since the LH is already going up toward that D later in the measure.
  • Add Square to the copyright info next to Nintendo.
  • m34 RH: Add a slur on the other side of the other side of grace notes leading to the A natural.
  • For the last 4 systems, I would distribute the measures 3-3-4-3. I think this provides the most even spacing for the music.

Really great sheet you got here.

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Latios212

Great sheet, thanks for the replacement! Just a few last comments from me.
- When using clef changes, introduce them at the start of the phrase where notes are in the new clef, and not before rests. This applies to m. 28 and 33-35.
- Page 1 footer and page 2 header are outside the margins.
- Cresc. in m. 28 is extremely close to the notes. We could make more space by flipping the right hand part.

Here's a file with the edits for you to use.
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Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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