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Author Topic: [3DS] Rhythm Heaven Megamix - "Catchy Tune" by ThatHiddenCharacter  (Read 271 times)

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Series: Rhythm Heaven
Game: Rhythm Heaven Megamix
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Catchy Tune
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: ThatHiddenCharacter
« Last Edit: August 19, 2019, 11:35:29 PM by Latios212 »
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Re: [3DS] Rhythm Heaven Megamix - "Catchy Tune" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #1 on: August 06, 2019, 05:09:46 AM »


Rhythm Heaven Megamix really needs some more love here.
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Re: [3DS] Rhythm Heaven Megamix - "Catchy Tune" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #2 on: August 08, 2019, 03:41:08 AM »

Don't have time to check the whole thing now, but some feedback while I'm glancing at it before I forget:
- Composer listing should have an "and"/"&"
- Measure distribution. The last system has 5; would strongly recommend bumping things up a bit to compensate (the first couple of systems are comparatively empty).
- Double check your articulations - some don't seem to match the original song. In particular looking at the staccato quarter notes in m. 6+ - don't think that's the best way to write it.
- Change B naturals to C flats in m. 17/21
- Rhythm in m. 9 incorrectly notated (split on beat 2)
- Start the 8va in m. 31 on the quarter note, not the tied whole note
- Layers flipped the wrong way in m. 32
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Re: [3DS] Rhythm Heaven Megamix - "Catchy Tune" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #3 on: August 12, 2019, 04:22:06 AM »

I'm so disappointed in myself for not catching that notation error in m9 and having those Bnats instead of Cb's. Anyway, the files have been updated.
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Re: [3DS] Rhythm Heaven Megamix - "Catchy Tune" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #4 on: August 18, 2019, 08:03:01 PM »

No worries, looking good! Last few things from me:
- Page 2 is resized to 95% for some reason...
- This is a bit ambiguous because of the nature of the sounds used in the original, but to me the melody in beat 3 of m. 3 and 5 sounds like how you wrote out m. 14+ in that there seems to be a 16th note implied that isn't quite there. I would suggest replacing the 16th notes with a staccato'd eighth as such.
- Move the mf in m. 6 left a bit
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Re: [3DS] Rhythm Heaven Megamix - "Catchy Tune" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #5 on: August 19, 2019, 03:22:51 AM »

- This is a bit ambiguous because of the nature of the sounds used in the original, but to me the melody in beat 3 of m. 3 and 5 sounds like how you wrote out m. 14+ in that there seems to be a 16th note implied that isn't quite there. I would suggest replacing the 16th notes with a staccato'd eighth as such.
When I arranged this, I had used the flash version of Audiostretch, and I could distinctly make out both of those notes. However, I know I won't be able to convince anyone otherwise, so I have made the suggested change anyway. As well as the other two changes. (Sorry if that sounds a bit jerky or stuck up or anything. I'm not intending to come across as that, but I know I have a tendency to word things poorly.)
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Re: [3DS] Rhythm Heaven Megamix - "Catchy Tune" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #6 on: August 19, 2019, 11:39:28 PM »

Yes, the pitch may be audible there, but I personally don't think it should be written in as it distracts from the sharpness of the beat 3 note - especially given how you wrote out similar figures later.

Anyway, looks good. The 8va marking at the beginning of the page 2 needed to be lowered a bit, but I went ahead and fixed that for you since it's a tiny change.
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Re: [3DS] Rhythm Heaven Megamix - "Catchy Tune" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #7 on: August 20, 2019, 03:56:34 AM »

Hey, this looks pretty nice to me.

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Re: [3DS] Rhythm Heaven Megamix - "Catchy Tune" by ThatHiddenCharacter
« Reply #8 on: August 20, 2019, 03:56:41 AM »

This submission has been accepted by Static.

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