[SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Corkboard" (Replacement) by Yug Guy

Started by Zeta, August 31, 2019, 11:47:01 AM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby Super Star
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Corkboard
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Yug Guy


Replacement Information:

Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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Yug_Guy


I just wanna highlight the first comment on the video:

Quote from: Marx and Peanut Butter (6 months ago)Sometimes you look at someone and wonder, "What is going on inside their head?"

*Coarkboard theme plays*

LeviR.star

Didn't someone try to replace this same sheet a few months ago? I feel like that happened...

Also, I don't know if that really has to be the case, but in a situation where the last measure is stretched out over an entire system, couldn't the right side be dragged over to the middle like this?

Just an idea, really
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Latios212

Quote from: LeviR.star on August 31, 2019, 12:02:47 PMDidn't someone try to replace this same sheet a few months ago? I feel like that happened...

Also, I don't know if that really has to be the case, but in a situation where the last measure is stretched out over an entire system, couldn't the right side be dragged over to the middle like this?

Just an idea, really
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Yep, that's right.

Anyway, yeah I agree with Levi's suggestion. In addition, I'd recommend writing the first 3 beats of the last measure in one layer for simplicity, similar to everywhere else.

Also while I'm peeking, no need to use 3/4 endings if they're the same as 1 and 2. Just put a D.C. at the end. (And https in the URL)
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
who needs education when you can have WAIFUS!!!!!

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Yug_Guy

Quote from: Latios212 on August 31, 2019, 12:15:05 PM
Quote from: LeviR.star on August 31, 2019, 12:02:47 PMDidn't someone try to replace this same sheet a few months ago? I feel like that happened...

Also, I don't know if that really has to be the case, but in a situation where the last measure is stretched out over an entire system, couldn't the right side be dragged over to the middle like this?
Yep, that's right.

Anyway, yeah I agree with Levi's suggestion. In addition, I'd recommend writing the first 3 beats of the last measure in one layer for simplicity, similar to everywhere else.

Also while I'm peeking, no need to use 3/4 endings if they're the same as 1 and 2. Just put a D.C. at the end. (And https in the URL)
Done, done and done.

Latios212

Cool. Last things from me:
- Move the 1 in the first ending marking more to the left
- Put the staccatos under the chords in m. 9 beats 1-3
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
who needs education when you can have WAIFUS!!!!!

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Yug_Guy

Quote from: Latios212 on September 01, 2019, 03:46:28 PMCool. Last things from me:
- Move the 1 in the first ending marking more to the left
- Put the staccatos under the chords in m. 9 beats 1-3
Done.

Latios212

My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
who needs education when you can have WAIFUS!!!!!

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Static

This is a really nice and clean sheet. I just have one I would suggest: to be more clear about which notes you want to be played a bit longer than the rest, you should put tenutos on the non-staccato notes.

Yug_Guy

Quote from: Static on September 09, 2019, 08:58:52 PMThis is a really nice and clean sheet. I just have one I would suggest: to be more clear about which notes you want to be played a bit longer than the rest, you should put tenutos on the non-staccato notes.
Done.

Static

This sheet will also get my Official Static Seal of Acceptance™. Looks great!

Zeta

This submission has been accepted by Static.

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