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[N64] Yoshi's Story - "Hard Times" by Bloop
« on: September 06, 2019, 03:53:23 PM »

Submission Information:

Series: Super Mario
Game: Yoshi's Story
Console: Nintendo 64
Title: Hard Times
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Bloop
« Last Edit: February 01, 2020, 10:07:26 PM by Latios212 »
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Re: [N64] Yoshi's Story - "Hard Times" by Bloop
« Reply #1 on: September 06, 2019, 03:53:53 PM »

Did you expect a polytonal piece to appear in a Yoshi game? Yeah, me neither

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Re: [N64] Yoshi's Story - "Hard Times" by Bloop
« Reply #2 on: September 07, 2019, 08:11:18 PM »

I would definitely not use two key signatures for this piece, even if it is polytonal; it's quite confusing to read. I would either use one keysig (Eb or E major), or none at all. Also, doing this will avoid issues like in the last bar in the LH (I'm assuming this should still be in Eb right? It's very ambiguous for someone who doesn't already know the piece well.) Otherwise, notes are good and accurate.

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Re: [N64] Yoshi's Story - "Hard Times" by Bloop
« Reply #3 on: October 23, 2019, 11:12:21 AM »

oh yeah


I actually kinda liked the two key signatures, but I guess it could be pretty hard to read. I changed it to keyless, and fixed the other things ^^

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Re: [N64] Yoshi's Story - "Hard Times" by Bloop
« Reply #4 on: October 26, 2019, 09:38:41 PM »

Looks great! I was originally going to suggest some accidental spelling changes, but looking over this again, I think what you have is the best and simplest way to show everything going on. I think I would maybe spell that A# in m10 LH as a Bb though.

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Re: [N64] Yoshi's Story - "Hard Times" by Bloop
« Reply #5 on: October 30, 2019, 02:29:15 PM »

Fixed!

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Re: [N64] Yoshi's Story - "Hard Times" by Bloop
« Reply #6 on: November 12, 2019, 02:21:03 AM »

I don't know what happened, but somehow the treble clef at the end got moved and now it's overlapping with the flat sign. Other than that, I approve.

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Re: [N64] Yoshi's Story - "Hard Times" by Bloop
« Reply #7 on: January 19, 2020, 02:23:16 AM »

Bump for arranger.

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Re: [N64] Yoshi's Story - "Hard Times" by Bloop
« Reply #8 on: February 01, 2020, 10:07:00 PM »

I've gotcha since it's a small edit. Also, clarified the swing marking with parentheses, and fixed beat 4 of m. 1 to be A instead of G.

This piece is so unsettling... but it's good to go now!
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Re: [N64] Yoshi's Story - "Hard Times" by Bloop
« Reply #9 on: February 01, 2020, 10:07:50 PM »

This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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