[WiiU] Captain Toad: Treasure Tracker - "Retro Ramp-Up" by ThatHiddenCharacter

Started by Zeta, October 15, 2019, 04:51:56 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Super Mario
Game: Captain Toad: Treasure Tracker
Console: Wii U
Title: Retro Ramp-Up
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: ThatHiddenCharacter

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ThatHiddenCharacter

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Libera

Generally looks pretty clean and well done.  Just a few things (and articulations that I'll clean up at the end.)

-The chords on beats 3-4 in bar 2 sound like C7 chords rather than Caug chords.
-There's actually no harmony notes under the first three notes of the melody in bars 18 and 28, just the C on beat 2.5.
-I'd decrease the space between systems on the first page so you can give the url and composer/arranger info more space.  You could also bring everything down a bit on the second page to make it look more even.

Also the start of this sounds like the start of one of the tracks from Celeste which threw me off briefly...

ThatHiddenCharacter

Quote from: Libera on October 17, 2019, 04:04:55 PM-There's actually no harmony notes under the first three notes of the melody in bars 18 and 28, just the C on beat 2.5.
That is what we like to call "THC not paying attention".

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Libera

No worries!  Regarding the distribution, perhaps this picture would help?

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I'm just trying to make better use of the white space at the bottom of page 1 and 2 now, along with extra evenness.  After that I'll approve.

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Latios212

Looks good. Just one tiny thing: beat 2 RH notes should be connected in m. 5 and 7.

Once this is fixed I approve.
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Libera

Quote from: Latios212 on November 17, 2019, 09:02:51 AMLooks good. Just one tiny thing: beat 2 RH notes should be connected in m. 5 and 7.

I got this and also fixed the articulations since that needed doing anyway.

Zeta