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Author Topic: [WiiU] Nintendo Land - "Main Plaza (Night)" by Radiak488417  (Read 261 times)

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[WiiU] Nintendo Land - "Main Plaza (Night)" by Radiak488417
« on: October 21, 2019, 01:01:39 AM »

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Nintendo Land
Console: Wii U
Title: Main Plaza (Night)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Radiak488417
« Last Edit: November 11, 2019, 12:41:03 AM by Latios212 »
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Re: [WiiU] Nintendo Land - "Main Plaza (Night)" by Radiak488417
« Reply #1 on: October 21, 2019, 01:15:08 AM »


Some things:

-Chords at m 13 are split between hands because they felt awkward to play with just the right hand (to me anyways)
-Not sure about the really high chords at the end, some notes might be wrong
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Re: [WiiU] Nintendo Land - "Main Plaza (Night)" by Radiak488417
« Reply #2 on: November 05, 2019, 11:57:57 AM »

Cool piece, I remember playing this game on holiday one time.  Generally looks pretty good, just a few things:

-The copyright/url text is too small; it should be size 10, not 8.
-The composer/arranger info should come down a bit so that it's not directly in line with the game name.
-The E in the bass at the end of bars 15 and 16 should be an F I think.
-I think it'd make a lot more sense to have the Fs in bar 13 in with the right hand chords.  They're really not that awkward to play as your thumb can hit both the G and F simultaneously and the way it's currently written makes that bar a lot more confusing than it needs to be.  (Also, currently the staccatos are interacting weirdly together at the moment due to the way it's written, although that could be remedied.)
-With regards to the chords at the end, I think they sound right apart from the second chord.  Although a Bb would make sense here, I don't think I can actually hear one, but I do think that there's another Eb higher up just underneath the top F.
-The 8va in bar 37 could start further to the left so that the 8 isn't directly on top of the staccato, which looks a little cluttered.
-I'd bring the systems closer together on page 2 so that the music isn't quite so close to the subtitle.  Similarly, on page 3 I'd bring everything down to give the subtitle some more room.

Nice work!
« Last Edit: November 07, 2019, 07:50:08 PM by Libera »
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Re: [WiiU] Nintendo Land - "Main Plaza (Night)" by Radiak488417
« Reply #3 on: November 06, 2019, 06:30:06 AM »

-The copyright/url text is too small; it should be size 10, not 8.
-The composer/arranger info should come down a bit so that it's not directly in line with the game name.
Fixed.


The E in the bass at the end of bars 15 and 16 should be an F I think.
I agree with m. 15 but I really think it's an E in m. 16. I guess we'll have to get a third opinion, in the meantime I've done m. 15.

-I think it'd make a lot more sense to have the Fs in bar 13 in with the right hand chords.
Done.

-With regards to the chords at the end, I do think that there's another Eb higher up just underneath the top F.
Sounds right to me. Thanks for that.

-The 8va in bar 37 could start further to the left so that the 8 isn't directly on top of the staccato, which looks a little cluttered.
Fixed...not sure how that happened.

-I'd bring the systems closer together on page 2 so that the music isn't quite so close to the subtitle.  Similarly, on page 3 I'd bring everything down to give the subtitle some more room.
I use Notepad, so I'm not sure I can do these. If someone else could help me out with this I'd appreciate it.

Thanks for the feedback!
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Re: [WiiU] Nintendo Land - "Main Plaza (Night)" by Radiak488417
« Reply #4 on: November 07, 2019, 07:55:54 PM »

I use Notepad, so I'm not sure I can do these. If someone else could help me out with this I'd appreciate it.

I've put up files with those spacing changes I've suggested.  If there's any issue with them let me know.

The edits look good, so other than waiting for someone else to check that E/F discrepancy in bar 16 (I checked it again myself and still hear an F) I approve.

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Re: [WiiU] Nintendo Land - "Main Plaza (Night)" by Radiak488417
« Reply #5 on: November 09, 2019, 06:22:40 PM »

Nice! This is a really good sheet. My note check:
- Bass doesn't play in m. 1/5/9 beat 4.5
- I'd suggest removing the staccato in m. 2/10 beat 2.5
- m. 10: missing the Ab in the second chord like m. 3?
- Would recommend making the Eb grace note in m. 14 D# instead
- I think m. 29 would make more sense using Gb instead of F#?

The edits look good, so other than waiting for someone else to check that E/F discrepancy in bar 16 (I checked it again myself and still hear an F) I approve.
Quite sure the last note in m. 16 is an E as written.

-Not sure about the really high chords at the end, some notes might be wrong
These sound good to me!

Aside from this, I noticed some of the margins/text alignment/etc. was a bit off and the distribution of the music on the pages could be improved a bit as well. Here's a file for you to use with some of those aesthetic adjustments since I know you have Notepad, feel free to use it. (This doesn't contain the note corrections.)
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Re: [WiiU] Nintendo Land - "Main Plaza (Night)" by Radiak488417
« Reply #6 on: November 09, 2019, 08:51:35 PM »

Bass doesn't play in m. 1/5/9 beat 4.5
WHAT how did I miss this...Fixed.

I'd suggest removing the staccato in m. 2/10 beat 2.5
Done.

- m. 10: missing the Ab in the second chord like m. 3?
I'm assuming you meant measure 11, in which case you're right. Fixed.

Would recommend making the Eb grace note in m. 14 D# instead
Done.

I think m. 29 would make more sense using Gb instead of F#?
Yeah you're right. Fixed.

Quite sure the last note in m. 16 is an E as written.
Ayyy thanks. I can honestly hear it as either, but an E makes way more sense to me. I was starting to go crazy thinking it was a quarter tone or something...

Distribution of the music on the pages could be improved a bit as well.
Oh yeah I was wondering about this (especially the last page) but since Libera didn't mention it I guess I forgot. Thanks for that.

Updated using Latios' file with all edits made.
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Re: [WiiU] Nintendo Land - "Main Plaza (Night)" by Radiak488417
« Reply #7 on: November 10, 2019, 01:47:04 AM »

I'm assuming you meant measure 11, in which case you're right. Fixed.
Oops, yeah that's what I meant.

Thanks for the fixes, everything looks good now! Accepting :)
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Re: [WiiU] Nintendo Land - "Main Plaza (Night)" by Radiak488417
« Reply #8 on: November 10, 2019, 01:47:14 AM »

This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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