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Author Topic: [N64] Yoshi's Story - "On the Beach" by Bloop  (Read 164 times)

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[N64] Yoshi's Story - "On the Beach" by Bloop
« on: October 23, 2019, 12:30:59 PM »

Submission Information:

Series: Super Mario
Game: Yoshi's Story
Console: Nintendo 64
Title: On the Beach
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Bloop
« Last Edit: November 16, 2019, 08:53:01 PM by Latios212 »
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Re: [N64] Yoshi's Story - "On the Beach" by Bloop
« Reply #1 on: October 23, 2019, 12:31:11 PM »

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Re: [N64] Yoshi's Story - "On the Beach" by Bloop
« Reply #2 on: November 02, 2019, 11:22:27 PM »

This is nice!
- Would suggest making the left margin a bit larger to accommodate the staff braces
- m. 10/12/18/similar: I'm hearing beat 2 of the LH restrike the E-B dyad instead of playing C? Is this a stylistic choice? (If so, fine by me)
- m. 23-24/27-28: I'd suggest keeping the top layer explicitly written. The way the middle layer has its rests written and notes flipped is a bit odd. Also make sure your LH notes and articulations are flipped correctly.
- m. 30: would suggest substituting D for B in these chords since B is already in the RH melody
- m. 39/41: those last two eighth notes sound like E instead of A
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Re: [N64] Yoshi's Story - "On the Beach" by Bloop
« Reply #3 on: November 04, 2019, 03:44:32 PM »

Fixed!

- m. 10/12/18/similar: I'm hearing beat 2 of the LH restrike the E-B dyad instead of playing C? Is this a stylistic choice? (If so, fine by me)
Yeah, I think the restriked dyad wouldn't get the point across as much, as it's probably intended as a dead note anyway.

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Re: [N64] Yoshi's Story - "On the Beach" by Bloop
« Reply #4 on: November 04, 2019, 06:28:48 PM »

Okay sounds good :) approved
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Re: [N64] Yoshi's Story - "On the Beach" by Bloop
« Reply #5 on: November 06, 2019, 04:37:11 AM »

Looks great! The only thing I would change is to make the system spacing on page 3 match page 2. Right now it's a little bit off.

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Re: [N64] Yoshi's Story - "On the Beach" by Bloop
« Reply #6 on: November 16, 2019, 08:53:14 PM »

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Re: [N64] Yoshi's Story - "On the Beach" by Bloop
« Reply #7 on: November 16, 2019, 09:20:18 PM »

Great! I suppose that means I should do this now.

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Re: [N64] Yoshi's Story - "On the Beach" by Bloop
« Reply #8 on: November 16, 2019, 09:20:32 PM »

This submission has been accepted by Static.

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