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[SWITCH] Fire Emblem: Three Houses - "Wailing" by Libera

Started by Zeta, November 02, 2019, 06:06:29 PM

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Submission Information:

Series: Fire Emblem
Game: Fire Emblem: Three Houses
Console: Nintendo Switch
Title: Wailing
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Libera

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Latios212

My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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Latios212

more three houses! Looks great, just a few things.

- The right end of the middle tie in m. 3 needs a bit of adjusting
- m. 9-10: sounds like a fifth (F-C) in the LH instead of a third (F-A)
- m. 11-15: any reason why these LH lower layer notes aren't octaves as well like in the original? Also, perhaps a double barline here?
- m. 17/first half of 18: I think I'm hearing E on the top of these LH chords? A bit difficult to tell
- m. 19: missing a crucial bass Eb on beat 1
- Would suggest flipping the open tie to bend down in m. 29
- Would suggest shortening the last system
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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Libera

New files are up.  I fixed everything apart from

Quote from: Latios212 on November 11, 2019, 05:31:07 PM- Would suggest shortening the last system

Because I don't really see the need and I think it looks better this way.

Latios212

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Quote from: Static on November 20, 2019, 06:29:13 PMLooks good, I'd just make the last system 3 measures instead of 2 so it spaces out the notes more evenly. I'd also change the held quarter note in m29 to a layer 2 dotted half to be more consistent with other parts of the sheet.

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