Samusthedude's arrangements

[Samusthedude]

Hey all, just finished formatting an arrangement. Any feedback would be appreciated.

The piece is Corridor from Persona 4 for ps2.

(.musx for newest finale)
(Pdf)
(.mus for older finale)

Here's the original for comparison

Got another arrangement, this one's "The Voice Someone Calls" from Persona 3. It was a serious formatting challenge so any feedback is really appreciated!
(Folder with all the files)

Here's the video I worked off of.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HXEk7Ip9pGk

[Latios212]

Ooh wow, great job for a first sheet, and nice to see more Persona stuff!

Just taking a glance at the moment, but overall this is quite clean and accurate. Some of the right hand quarter notes in the beginning section should be triads though - for instance, m. 1 is missing F on top, m. 2 is missing E on top, m. 5 is missing B flat. Give them another look to double check you've got all the pitches.

Hope to see more!

[Samusthedude]

Thanks for the advice, I appreciate the feedback. I've made the changes and submitted.

[Samusthedude]

Got another arrangement, this one's "The Voice Someone Calls" from Persona 3. It was a serious formatting challenge so any feedback is really appreciated!
(Folder with all the files)

Here's the video I worked off of.