[MUL] Kingdom - "Rest" by Th3Gavst3r

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Kingdom
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Rest
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Th3Gavst3r

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[Th3Gavst3r]

[Libera]

Looks pretty good, just two things:

1. I think this should be written in D major rather than G.  I feel like the piece is moving around on IV and iii chords and never quite settling down on a tonic chord, rather than constantly being on the I and #VII chords which just makes less sense to me harmonically and with how I'm feeling the piece.

2. You could make the voicings a lot clearer on the second page by using multiple layers rather than sticking to just one in each staff.  The added lines help somewhat but I feel like it's not particularly clear at the moment what's going on.

[Khunjund]

I also recommend notating this with two sharps, but I believe the underlying tonic is B minor (aeolian), not D major.

[Th3Gavst3r]

I agree with both changes. Changed to two sharps (whatever the tonic is ) and cleaned up the voicing on that one system

[Libera]

You've still got some doubled up notes in bar 29.  Other than that, looks good.

[Th3Gavst3r]

You've still got some doubled up notes in bar 29.  Other than that, looks good.

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[Libera]

Approved

[Latios212]

Looks great! Just one thing - shouldn't beat 4 (RH) of m. 31 match the measures above and below it? (The E D from the middle layer)

[Th3Gavst3r]

Looks great! Just one thing - shouldn't beat 4 (RH) of m. 31 match the measures above and below it? (The E D from the middle layer)

Hey yeah, you're right. The emphasized notes are flipped from the other measures to this one, which makes it hard to notice the E D. Fixed

[Latios212]

wheee

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This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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