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Submission Information:
Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby Super Star
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Dynablade Overworld
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Yug Guy


Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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[Yug_Guy]

Name should be changed to "Dynablade Overworld"

[Latios212]

Awesome, glad to have a replacement for this one!

Notes look right, although there are a handful of missing/misspelled tones:
- B's missing in the first chords in m. 3
- Db's in m. 3-4 should be C# (A7 chord)
- Gb in m. 5/6 should be F# (major ninth over the E bass)
- D missing in chord in m. 9
- I think F# would make sense in m. 10 (leading into Gn)
- C's missing in chords in m. 10
- Bb missing in first chord in m. 11

Cosmetic:
- Collapse the first chord in m. 4 into one layer
- Unbeam the eighths when you have them on beats 3.5-4 in m. 10/12/14.
- Two eighth rests in m. 14 should be a quarter rest
- https

[Yug_Guy]

Should all be fixed.

[Latios212]

Cool, almost there:
- LH notes between beats 3.5-4 are still beamed together in 10/12/14
- Last thing I'm noticing is inconsistency between LH/RH beaming in m. 13/15. Be consistent and beam them together over that beat 4 rest, or alternatively disconnect any beams that extend over a beat 4 rest in measures 1/5/7/11/13/15.

[mastersuperfan]

Since you're unbeaming all eighth note pairs from beat 3.5 to 4, I feel like you might as well just unbeam everything that spans across beats. That's my preference, anyway.

The only other suggestion I have would be to add a grace note to m17 RH beat 1 (either Cn or C#; I think I prefer C# a bit more but either works).

[Yug_Guy]

- LH notes between beats 3.5-4 are still beamed together in 10/12/14
- Last thing I'm noticing is inconsistency between LH/RH beaming in m. 13/15. Be consistent and beam them together over that beat 4 rest, or alternatively disconnect any beams that extend over a beat 4 rest in measures 1/5/7/11/13/15.

My bad. I thought you were referring to the RH in your previous post.

The only other suggestion I have would be to add a grace note to m17 RH beat 1 (either Cn or C#; I think I prefer C# a bit more but either works).

Done.

[Latios212]

My bad. I thought you were referring to the RH in your previous post.
Done.

No worries! Yeah just be sure to be consistent.

Measure 1 still remains to have its beams broken; everything else looks good.

[Yug_Guy]

Measure 1 still remains to have its beams broken; everything else looks good.

u got it dude

[Latios212]

noice

[Bespinben]

M.16 beat 4 is a G7b9 chord, so the G# would actually be spelled as Ab.

[Yug_Guy]

M.16 beat 4 is a G7b9 chord, so the G# would actually be spelled as Ab.

It's always the little things, isn't it?

[mastersuperfan]

double noice

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