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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Night in the Woods
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Shapes
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: BrainyLucario

[BrainyLucario]

This one felt really easy to do, minus two sections that i"m really unsure of. The one of which is the final measure

[Bespinben]

M. 1-8, m. 16-23 — Find a way to make this more playable. If you prioritize the ostinato, you may need to transpose the sustained notes; if you prioritize the original pitches, you may need to include rests in the ostinato to be able to play the sustained notes.

M. 11-12, 15, 26-27, 30 — Re-transcribe the melody here.

M. 9, 11, 13, 15, 24, 26, 28, 30 — Rhythm notation correction: Half notes, dotted half notes, and whole notes are allowed to cross the middle of the bar. You don’t need to show beat 3 in these instances (see “Two-Level Rhythmic Parsing Rule”).

Page layout — Try to avoid partially filled additional pages where possible. You could fit this onto 1 page easily.

[BrainyLucario]

Gotcha, the page thing is a bit beyond me considering I have finale notepad 2012.

And I plan on prioritizing the ostinato, though the was of transposing might be a bit tricky for me to figure out, I’ll see what I can work out.

[BrainyLucario]

Fixed the melody and notation errors. I cant fix the page length one and need to transpose still. I might need to ask for help on that since ive never done that before

[BrainyLucario]

Ok i think I transposed it like I intended to. it should be playable now.

[Bespinben]

M.16 and m.23 are still transcribed incorrectly. You'll also want to fix the bass in m. 13.

Some new things:
The bass in m.1-2, 5-6, 16-17, & 20-21 is actually a C natural, and there is an E for the middle voice in m.1-2 & m.15-16.
The ostinato is actually not straight quarters. Should look like this:

[BrainyLucario]

Measure 16 and 23?  Umm I’m going to assume you mean 15 and 30 since I forgot to change them.

But otherwise i think I got it this time. The other changes have been added

[Bespinben]

Oops -- yes, m.15 & 30 is what I meant, good catch. I've updated the files to have a 1-page layout, and also added a repeat marker to the end of the loop.

Nice job~

[Latios212]

Sweet, great work guys! This looks fantastic!

Just one tiny little thing - LH of m. 26 re-strikes the E on beat 4. (I hate it when pieces almost repeat perfectly lol) We'll get that edited in for ya.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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