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[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario Land 2: 6 Golden Coins
Console: Game Boy
Title: The Castle Gates
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: PokéMaster

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[PokeMaestro]

[Latios212]

Good work! Notes look good, although there are some things that need to be sorted out before we get this one in.
- Check the formatting guidelines for the style/font of the track and game title in the header. You're also missing the URL: https://www.NinSheetMusic.org/
- I'm getting something slower for the tempo, around 112 BPM.

There are also notes that need to be spelled differently, use the following spellings:
- Measure 1 and 5: D# and G# in the right hand
- Measure 4: Db in the left hand
- Measure 6: C# and F# in the right hand
- Measure 7: G# and C# in the right hand
- Measure 8: F# and B in the right hand

[LeviR.star]

- Check the formatting guidelines for the style/font of the track and game title in the header. You're also missing the URL: https://www.NinSheetMusic.org/

In addition to linking newer people to the formatting guidelines, we really ought to give them a template, too. I've got one of my own ready:

NSM Template file.mus

[PokeMaestro]

Good work! Notes look good, although there are some things that need to be sorted out before we get this one in.
- Check the formatting guidelines for the style/font of the track and game title in the header. You're also missing the URL: https://www.NinSheetMusic.org/
- I'm getting something slower for the tempo, around 112 BPM.

There are also notes that need to be spelled differently, use the following spellings:
- Measure 1 and 5: D# and G# in the right hand
- Measure 4: Db in the left hand
- Measure 6: C# and F# in the right hand
- Measure 7: G# and C# in the right hand
- Measure 8: F# and B in the right hand

Yeh, I've done the enharmonic reinterpretation and I've changed the tempo. The formatting has also been changed!

In addition to linking newer people to the formatting guidelines, we really ought to give them a template, too. I've got one of my own ready:

NSM Template file.mus

Thank you!

[Latios212]

Awesome! Just a last few tiny things...

- This is pretty minor, but important to give the sheet an overall clean look. The text is formatted correctly but could be respaced a bit better. The copyright/URL is below the bottom page margin and the composer/arranger info could be a little closer together with more space around them.
- The video you linked uses the title "The Castle Gates". I'd recommend changing the title to that.
- The sheet is missing an opening dynamic marking.

Here's what I mean: [FILE]. Please feel free to use it

[PokeMaestro]

Oh, thank you for the direct providing. So, I'm finished now

[Latios212]

Yep, I think it's good, so approving although one other updater will come along to see if I've missed anything.

[mastersuperfan]

The spellings in m5 RH still need to be changed to D# and G#.

[mastersuperfan]

Since it's a quick fix, I went ahead and updated the files. Accepted!

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by mastersuperfan.

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