[MUL] Night in the Woods - "MaeBea" by BrainyLucario

Started by Zeta, May 25, 2020, 01:23:49 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Night in the Woods
Console: Multiplatform
Title: MaeBea
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: BrainyLucario

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BrainyLucario


The pdf might be screwed up as well as the mus since when i transferred it it kinda messed it up.
When given the choice between adulting and music, choose music every time.

Bespinben

The left hand has missing parts. These would be the correct notes (adjusting for overlapping notes and hand reach):

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The rhythm of the bell line is correct, but it is oddly notated. "Showing beat 3" is a side-effect Two-Level Rhythmic Parsing Rule; whole notes and on-beat half notes can cross the middle of the bar. It should be notated like this:

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On the arranging side, the arrangement feels a bit empty. In the OST, the shimmery organ chords in the background help to fill in the gaps between the bass guitars and the bells. You could emulate this by adding harmonies.

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Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
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BrainyLucario

Notepad issues prevent the changes to measure 5 and stuff but everything else is updated
When given the choice between adulting and music, choose music every time.

Bespinben

Nice! Few fixes:

*Upper bass voice in m.8 beat 4 should be "D" instead of "E"
*Upper bass voice in m.11 beat 4 should be "C" instead of "D"

*M.9-12 could also benefit from harmonization:
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Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
Someone beat Bespinben to making PMD music?! GASP!

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BrainyLucario

BrainyLucario: Who wants to fix sheets at 3 in the morning?

Bespinben: Oh boy 3 AM!

Fixed
When given the choice between adulting and music, choose music every time.

Bespinben

#3amSquad
~Le approve~

I've updated the files with the non-Notepad-achievable edits, and also optimized the layout.

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Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
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Latios212

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Also I'd personally separate layers in 10/12... but definitely fine as is. Once that typo's fixed I'll accept :)
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

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Bespinben

Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
Someone beat Bespinben to making PMD music?! GASP!

MLF for Chatroom Mod next Tuesday

Latios212

My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
who needs education when you can have WAIFUS!!!!!

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Zeta

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