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Re: Rubikium's Replacements
« Reply #30 on: December 10, 2020, 05:33:06 AM »

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I hear a quarter on b4 of RH m25, not 16ths
I'm not sure how I feel about LH m35-50. It takes a background voice from a high register and pulls it lower and it then overpowers the rest of the ideas the LH is trying to play. I would recommend either reverting it to the first instance, or moving notes the 8ths are hitting along with the bassline personally. Keep it how it is for m50 though.
I think something like this would work quite well for m27-34

Also up to you, but adding in some pedal can make the arpeggios easier because the performer doesn't need to hold the notes at all.

Otherwise, this looks pretty great, nice job.

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Re: Rubikium's Replacements
« Reply #31 on: December 10, 2020, 11:51:36 PM »

The only issues I had with final cackletta were the weird font of the DC and tempo mark but I'll just fix those and throw it in accepted because it's great.

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Re: Rubikium's Replacements
« Reply #32 on: December 13, 2020, 07:11:10 PM »

The Grand Finale
I hear a quarter on b4 of RH m25, not 16ths
I'm not sure how I feel about LH m35-50. It takes a background voice from a high register and pulls it lower and it then overpowers the rest of the ideas the LH is trying to play. I would recommend either reverting it to the first instance, or moving notes the 8ths are hitting along with the bassline personally. Keep it how it is for m50 though.
I think something like this would work quite well for m27-34

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Also up to you, but adding in some pedal can make the arpeggios easier because the performer doesn't need to hold the notes at all.
I have added a "con pedale" text at the start.
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Re: Rubikium's Replacements
« Reply #33 on: December 13, 2020, 10:02:08 PM »

To do list after we're done making musical changes:
-Change con pedale text to a dynamic
-Rewrite tempo mark in finale
-respace systems so they're a hair further away from the running titles
-make system spacing more consistent across pages

aside from these issues which will be fixed later, I approve

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Re: Rubikium's Replacements
« Reply #34 on: December 19, 2020, 09:23:52 PM »

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  • m14 LH beat 1: Should be Fx instead of D#.
  • You use Fxs for m15 and 17, but Gns for 50 and 53... It should be Fxs for both for consistency. The Fns at both sections should be E#s.
  • m26 beats 3-4 RH: This should be 2 triplets instead of a sextuplet.
  • m26 LH beat 1: Should also be Fx
  • m29 LH Layer 1: D#s should be E#s.
  • m37, 45 LH: These should be E#s (F#7 chord)

I made all the changes Maelstrom listed, along with the ones above. Here's the finished version.

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Re: Rubikium's Replacements
« Reply #35 on: December 20, 2020, 12:08:14 AM »

The Grand Finale (2 piano ver)
note: p1/2 =piano 1/2
-m5-6 - I'd recommend moving the chord from p2 LH to p1 RH and incorperating the arpeggio that's still going on there.
-m7+ p1 LH - maybe beef up those octaves like you did in your version of this sheet?
-12/22 p1 RH  - I'd recommend removing the C on b4 because it hinders playability and is in the other hand anyway.
-m52 - p2 LH here hits on beat 3, not beat 1 for that low Gb. Same in m56
-Bass motion in m53-54/57-58 is not here and should be, imo
-m38/46 p2 LH b3 - half note should be a Gb.
-m42 b3 - Should be a half note octave here playing a Eb
-m49-50 p2 LH should look identical to m41-42 after the above edit
Otherwise it looks pretty great

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Re: Rubikium's Replacements
« Reply #36 on: December 22, 2020, 08:34:23 PM »

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The edits looks good. I have made some new changes at m. 26 RH (removed lower notes), and mm. 51-58 RH (changed lower notes). Please take a look.

The Grand Finale (2 piano ver)
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Re: Rubikium's Replacements
« Reply #37 on: February 21, 2021, 11:23:17 PM »

Sorry this took so long. The initial tempo looks oddly large. Since you've got notepad, I fixed that for you. Aside from that, looks great, so I approve.

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Re: Rubikium's Replacements
« Reply #38 on: February 24, 2021, 03:44:07 AM »

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Sorry for the wait on this one, the additional changes look great. I'll accept this one now.

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Re: Rubikium's Replacements
« Reply #39 on: February 25, 2021, 04:12:29 AM »

The Grand Finale (Two Pianos)
This looks good, just adjusted a few small things here and there including:
- Clef change for piano II LH in m. 5-6
- E naturals in m. 11/23 should be Fb
- Slight adjustments to system/staff spacing to even things out on the page

Accepting~

And that's a wrap on these replacements! Will move this thread to the project archive.
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