[PC] To the Moon - "Once Upon a Memory (Piano)" by Latios212

Started by Zeta, June 30, 2020, 04:38:32 PM

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Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: To the Moon
Console: PC
Title: Once Upon a Memory (Piano)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Latios212

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Latios212

In this innocent little piano solo... a discreet but unmistakable usage of a 15/16 time signature!

My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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Zeila

Sounds and looks great! Some small things:
  • m2 and m3 beat 2 sound like they should be arpeggiated, and m3 is missing an A
  • m26 beat 2.5 sounds like the G and B are arpeggiated but it's fair if you want to omit that; beat 5 the G sounds like it should be an E instead

Latios212

Oops, thanks for the corrections! Left m. 26 beat 2.5 as is but fixed the rest :)
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Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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mastersuperfan

Beautiful.
- The F on m17 LH beat 3 should be raised an octave.
- Do you want to put a poco rit. somewhere near the end?
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on February 11, 2016, 03:00:36 PMthere's also a huge difference in quality between 2000 songs and 2010 songs
Quote from: Latios212 on February 11, 2016, 03:29:24 PMThe difference between 2000 songs and 2010 songs is 10 songs.

Latios212

Thanks!

- Oops, fixed
- Makes sense, added in m. 26

Files updated :)
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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mastersuperfan

Last few small things that I missed the first time around:
- m15 LH, the A sixteenth note in the sounds like it's tied to the quarter instead of being re-articulated.
- m15 RH, I don't hear the D in the dotted quarter.
- m22 RH, do you want to flip the quarter note up on the last beat?

that is all

i give this sheet a 15 out of 16
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on February 11, 2016, 03:00:36 PMthere's also a huge difference in quality between 2000 songs and 2010 songs
Quote from: Latios212 on February 11, 2016, 03:29:24 PMThe difference between 2000 songs and 2010 songs is 10 songs.

Latios212

Thanks again! The adjustments to m. 15 sound good; I'd rather leave that note in m. 22 as is though. It's flipped down everywhere else and doesn't really cause any clashes here.
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
who needs education when you can have WAIFUS!!!!!

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Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on February 11, 2016, 03:00:36 PMthere's also a huge difference in quality between 2000 songs and 2010 songs
Quote from: Latios212 on February 11, 2016, 03:29:24 PMThe difference between 2000 songs and 2010 songs is 10 songs.

Sebastian

Man, do I love the To the Moon soundtrack. Awesome work, Lat! : )

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