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Author Topic: [NDS] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Time & Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Darkness -  (Read 1009 times)

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Thanks for the help on this one MSF and sorry for it taking so long. Some final cleanup:
- You've got some odd spacing (see: dots outside of measure in m. 17). Click on each measure when using the note entry tool to respace and make sure everything doesn't look oddly stretched or cramped.
- Use a quarter rest instead of whole rest in m. 5 to be clearer that it's a pickup.
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Mkay, so the sheet's been updated. Thanks to Latios for helping upload the files while I was having site trouble.
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No problem! Approved :)
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Looks really good! The only (minor) thing I have to say is that I think the 8va's are now TOO close to the notes for systems where the primo RH doesn't have any dynamics. m8-10, for example, looks fine, but I'd raise them up slightly over m11-13, m23-25, m26-28, m32-34, and m35-37. As an example, this is how high above the notes I would personally raise it for m35-37:



Also maybe if you could move the mp in secondo m1 like, one tiny increment up, so that the bottom line of the p isn't exactly coinciding with the staff line.
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there's also a huge difference in quality between 2000 songs and 2010 songs
The difference between 2000 songs and 2010 songs is 10 songs.

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All right. I've updated the files. Whatcha think?
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there's also a huge difference in quality between 2000 songs and 2010 songs
The difference between 2000 songs and 2010 songs is 10 songs.

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This submission has been accepted by mastersuperfan.

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot
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