[PS4] Yakuza 0 - "Theme of Serena" by rcpercussionist

Started by Zeta, July 31, 2020, 03:57:37 PM

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rcpercussionist

The files look great! I'm really appreciative of the updates and changes that you've made. I'm happy with seeing the submission approved at this point.
Thank you!

Latios212

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This looks terrific :D Just a last couple of aesthetic things before we call this one finished:
- E flat in m. 6 should be D# instead (major third in B7 chord)
- Some of the melody notes in m. 9-10 should be flipped downwards
- m. 11 and 16 shouldn't have the last dotted quarter rest in the lower staff because the voice moves to the top staff
- I think m. 24-25 makes more sense as one large 6/4 bar because it's one extended phrase.

We made these edits for you, so all good to accept if it's all good by you :)
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mastersuperfan

Quote from: Latios212 on August 03, 2020, 07:01:58 PMWe'll make these edits for you momentarily, so all good to accept if it's all good by you :)
Edits have been made, let us know if the files look good to you!

Also, I had one other question—do you think mezzo piano (m1) and piano (m25) would be more fitting dynamics instead of mezzo forte (m1) and mezzo piano (m25)? This feels like a very chill track that gets very soft at the end, so I wonder if mf in m1 and mp in m25 might not be quiet enough.
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on February 11, 2016, 03:00:36 PMthere's also a huge difference in quality between 2000 songs and 2010 songs
Quote from: Latios212 on February 11, 2016, 03:29:24 PMThe difference between 2000 songs and 2010 songs is 10 songs.

rcpercussionist

Yep, I'm cool with all of these changes! The sheets look great. Also I do agree that mp and p would be more appropriate dynamics as opposed to mf and mp. Thanks to everyone!

mastersuperfan

Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on February 11, 2016, 03:00:36 PMthere's also a huge difference in quality between 2000 songs and 2010 songs
Quote from: Latios212 on February 11, 2016, 03:29:24 PMThe difference between 2000 songs and 2010 songs is 10 songs.

Latios212

Woohoo! Let's get this one in! Thanks all for the hard work on this one, it looks fantastic!
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

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This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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