[SWITCH] Paper Mario: The Origami King - "Exploring Shangri-Spa" by Latios212

Started by Zeta, September 28, 2020, 04:35:40 PM

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In m35 and m36 RH, the spacing between the rolled chord symbol and the chord itself is consistent (more spaced in m35 than in m36). Also, I wonder if the extra space at the beginning of m36 is a little too much.

That said, those are extremely minor, and I have nothing else to say, so I approve.
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Oops, I think that spacing is a remnant of when I had a different key signature there. Adjusted, thanks :)
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RH m33 b1 - I hear a G here before the D.
RH m34 b1 - I hear 2 16ths here - B followed by a C, which makes b1.5 a restrike.
RH m40 - Not sure about the harp here at all. B1.25 might be a D#? E? It's right around there.

That's it, nice work.

Latios212

Ah whoops. Those are indeed not rests in the RH.

Quote from: Maelstrom on November 24, 2020, 01:37:55 PMRH m33 b1 - I hear a G here before the D.
It's a bit hard to tell which of the Cmaj notes are there, but I think E sounds like it leads into the rest of the line I have written in the RH.

Quote from: Maelstrom on November 24, 2020, 01:37:55 PMRH m34 b1 - I hear 2 16ths here - B followed by a C, which makes b1.5 a restrike.
Ooh yeah that Bn against Bb sounds nice here. I don't think it should strike the C as a 16th note, though.

Quote from: Maelstrom on November 24, 2020, 01:37:55 PMRH m40 - Not sure about the harp here at all. B1.25 might be a D#? E? It's right around there.
Ah yup. Second note there is an E.

Thanks for the check! Updated the files.
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