[3DS] The Legend of Zelda: Tri Force Heroes - "Woodlands" by Cashwarrior1

Started by Zeta, September 22, 2020, 11:47:10 AM

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LH:
m18 - 3rd 2nd layer chord - the Gb should be spelled as a F#
---m21 to m27 LH should be an octave lower with the exception of the last 5 notes in m23 and m27.
m21 - I hear all the Cs after the first chord down an octave
m22 - the off beat Gs in the 2nd half aren't that strong, remove the lower octave harmony
m23 - Same deal with the 2nd half of the measure.
m24 - same thing in the 2nd half
m25 -
m27 - Final octave is a G, not a C (should be lower)
m28 to end - I put the notes in their proper octaves. The way you wrote it completely obscured the motion of the notes in weird ways



RH:
no rolled chord mark on the final chord in m7?


Concering what MSF said
Staccatos in m20 should be below 100%
I hear m27 as MSF said it, and it's unplayable the way it is with the 2 layers here.
30 RH lower note is a F# 100%
m31 - ok so I would recommend using a Fn for all the Fs instead of the E# and a Gb instead of the F# on the 5th to last note. The Gb is less correct to notate that way, but it means the 3 Fns are notated properly, which is the greater good imo. You could use the split stem tool to have both the F and F# but that one's up to you. Regardless, make sure you change the LH too

Latios212

A few more things as I browse:
- first system is missing the indent
- url should be https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/
- m. 24 crescendo leads to nowhere (should have a dynamic after)
- is the half rest at the end missing a dot?
- can we center staccatos around noteheads?
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cashwarrior1

Updated.

Quote from: Latios212 on January 16, 2021, 04:07:52 PM- can we center staccatos around noteheads?

I'm not exactly sure what to do about this, I had thought the default spot finale put them was correct. I went through and manually moved the staccatos so they appeared closer to the center of the notehead. I'm not sure if that was what you were asking to do or if there's an easy way to do this?

Latios212

oof please don't manually move them :(

First, clear any manual positioning you had. Then open the articulation dialog box for the staccato here, and uncheck "center over/under stem when stem side".
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Latios212

Cool. Some articulations were still off:

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but I've fixed the articulations for you (as well as the inconsistent "composed by" / "arrangement by") and will now accept :P
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