Th3Gavst3r's Halloween Sheet - [SWITCH] Super Mario Maker 2 - Castle (Super Mario World) (Night)

Started by Th3Gavst3r, October 14, 2020, 08:02:00 PM

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Latios212

- Opening dynamics!
- m. 13 - Ab chord (change the top note from G# to Ab). I'd also recommend spelling the third chord as F# major.
- m. 15 - hide the rest in the lower staff, and add a natural to display on the last B (press P twice).
- I think you're missing two bars between m. 35-36...
- On the not-first pages, I'd recommend putting the systems a bit closer together to make a little more room for the header.
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Th3Gavst3r

Quote from: Latios212 on October 17, 2020, 07:22:50 AM- Opening dynamics!
Whoops D:

Quote from: Latios212 on October 17, 2020, 07:22:50 AM- m. 13 - Ab chord (change the top note from G# to Ab). I'd also recommend spelling the third chord as F# major.
- m. 15 - hide the rest in the lower staff, and add a natural to display on the last B (press P twice).
Nice catches! Added em all


Quote from: Latios212 on October 17, 2020, 07:22:50 AM- I think you're missing two bars between m. 35-36...
Whoops D:

Quote from: Latios212 on October 17, 2020, 07:22:50 AM- On the not-first pages, I'd recommend putting the systems a bit closer together to make a little more room for the header.
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Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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Static

  • You don't need the extra 16th notes in m28 and 44 because they're doubled in the RH - those measures should look just like m29 and 44.

...and that's all I got, nice sheet.

Th3Gavst3r

Quote from: Static on October 21, 2020, 01:13:22 PM
  • You don't need the extra 16th notes in m28 and 44 because they're doubled in the RH - those measures should look just like m29 and 44.
Great point, took those out

In the spirit of consistency, I also nudged a few notes in the LH in measures 37-41 to keep those patterns similar.

Static

m28 and 44 look the same to me in the new file. Sorry if I was unclear but I meant removing the 16th notes from the LH part.
Looking at it again, I noticed some extra doubled notes (the last 16th notes in m29-30 and 45-46). This is what I'm suggesting:
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Quote from: Static on October 23, 2020, 06:31:00 AMm28 and 44 look the same to me in the new file. Sorry if I was unclear but I meant removing the 16th notes from the LH part.
Looking at it again, I noticed some extra doubled notes (the last 16th notes in m29-30 and 45-46). This is what I'm suggesting:
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Ohh k I think I see what you were saying now. I went back over the sheet looking for overlaps and replaced a lot of notes in the RH with rests, and added couple of parentheses in the LH.
Pretty sure all the places I changed are
* m16-22, m28-21, m44-46 RH rests
* m28,44 LH parens