[GCN] Luigi's Mansion - "Melody Pianissima Collection" by Nine Lives

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Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Luigi's Mansion
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Melody Pianissima Collection
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Nine Lives

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[NineLives]

Sources: "Mansion" | "Water" | "Super Mario Bros. 3" | "Battle"

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This is neat

Mansion

• All Ebs and Gbs should be D#s and F#s (B7 chords).

Water

• m29 looks a bit squished compared to the other measures.

Super Mario Bros. 3

• I think it would make more sense if only the first four 8th notes were covered with the 8va, and then the next four were normal.
• m35 also looks squished.

Battle

• m39 beat 4 LH: I hear a C 16th note after the last F.
• The RH chords don't sound quite as busy as you have them. I hear the octaves for each chord, but it sounds like there's only 1 or 2 inner notes for each. Some of the notes sound different too. This is what I'm hearing (ignore the LH, I was editing stuff and accidentally moved around some notes):
  
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Other general things:

• The submission title and the sheet title should match; I'm personally leaning towards your submission title since it shows that it's a collection. "Melody Pianissima Themes" would also be a good title, imo.
• You can just have "Composed by" rather than "Compositions by"
  
• Tempo markings should be lined up with the left side of the time signature.
• The top and bottom margins on each page don't line up.

[NineLives]

I believe I got all the changes done.

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Battle
m39 beat 4 LH: I hear a C 16th note after the last F.

This is the only thing left; it's fine if you don't hear it. It was kind of hard to hear bc of the pedal, so I'm not totally sure its there.

[NineLives]

Updated.

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Looks good, I approve

[Latios212]

Do Water/SMB3 really just cut off like that? I haven't played the game...

Mansion
- m. 8 beat 1 should be an E major triad (E-G#-B), no A# grace note.

Battle
- I'm hearing something different for some of these left hand notes as well as find some of the spelling odd - can you compare this to what you have?
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(Also, I wouldn't say courtesy naturals at the beginning of the measure are needed here since the keysig is blank and the spellings change significantly)

[NineLives]

Files have been updated.

Do Water/SMB3 really just cut off like that? I haven't played the game...

Yes. Those two are samples used for questions the player has to answer one of correctly to battle Melody. Melody plays one and asks either something like "What was the composer thinking of when composing this song?" or "What famous game does this song come from?" respectively.

[Latios212]

Gotcha... accepting!

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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